Absobloominlutely brilliant.
For some reason, this reading of the first two paragraphs triggered a memory of being inside the Great Pyramid, with all those tons of stone overhead... The illumination was adequate, but I wish I'd had Severus with me, reassuring me, instead of my no-nonsense mother... Well, I survived, and the Great Pyramid is still standing! Then, another flashback to the lengthy, deep tunnels leading to the tombs in the Valley of the Kings. Poor Harry! I never suffered claustrophobia or fear of the dark, but Egypt could really set someone off! Now, back to the underside of Hogwarts... 🤫
I loved this chapter. I've never imagined Albus as a Muggle, but you did it perfectly! So funny!
Wow. This is really good, and really tense.
Why?????? Just why???? Help! I'm calling emergency for Sev! Come on! Please!
(In other words, very tense and angsty, and enjoyable.)
I really don't like that Harry just forgave Ron like that.
I like this story so far. I really want Meadowsweet and Harry to get together!
I know that you may have written this a while ago, but I saw the comment at the end of the chapter and felt horrible. My condolences, and this is a great series.
This is my first time reading this series, but so far, I think it's pretty good.
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