Ohh, interesting cliff hanger. I really enjoyed the Severus/Remus interaction and loved the scene where severus was taking care of Harry
This is such an interesting, novel plot, brought to life by your wonderful writing skills. Highly enjoyable and an excellent read
Great chapter; I loved the Harry/Severus interaction.
Great chapter with wonderful character interaction.
Very interesting twist; great story, you're a really good writer!
Great chapter; I love how you've written this- I've read stories where Severus has been forced to rape a disguised Lily before but this is definately one of the best.
Interesting chapters. Poor Severus: it's really in character for him not to realise, even now, that Harry is an altogether different boy.
Brilliant chapter; I loved the Severus/Albus interaction and I'm really curious about the package
Great chapter: poor Harry, saving Severus is a very 'Harryish' thing to do but the concequences are pretty severe.
Great chapter; I love the way you've slowly built up the tension
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