| Title: Return to Grimmauld Place
| 28 Jun 2006 4:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Nafs (Anonymous)
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I am quite intrigued by this story and looking forward to reading more, but if you could please fix the formatting for Chapter Two, it would be much easier on my eyes!
| Title: Return to Grimmauld Place
| 27 Oct 2005 12:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Nice second chapter. :) i have a feeling that the stranger in black who rescued him is Snape and that he's the one supplying the antidote. I liked how you had it seem as if someone in the hospital were in on it without really spelling it out and unmasking them. More realistic that way.i can't wait until Snape comes into the scene. :) I guess that it will be a long, hard recovery for Harry. I like how driven he seems, that he wants to continue his quest to be able to defeat Voldemort. And the way he always says "m'okay" is so in character and a nice touch. :) I'm liking the story so far.
You need to repost this chapter though, your formatting isn't skipping lines and everything's in one big block of text. :
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