This is such a great story (which I found by it coming up when I clicked on the link for a random story today) that I couldn't stop to review each chapter but just had to keep hitting that little 'next' button at the end of each one. You have an excellent grasp of the characters and their motivations, write wonderful dialog (a weak point in a lot of other fics that I've read), and while giving things your own spin, have kept everything in Ms. Rowlings universe. Favourite bits: Draco and Hermione's library conversation, Neville saving the day when Liza came into the common room whilst everyone was teasing Harry, the inscriptions in the books that Severus gave Harry for Christmas, Harry's Christmas note to Sev, Luna's prank on her housemates, the Saturday morning flights with Harry and Draco... and more than I think the site will let me type in a single review. I am looking forward to future installments whenever you end up posting them and this is certainly going on my favourites list.
Wonderful story you have there!! I do think Harry is being unreasonable of his hatred against Snape. When are they going to make up? It's been chpaters.
Today is May 8, 2008, over a year and a half since you left off writing this story. I fear, not without reason, that you will never complete it. Nevertheless, may I add my voice to the others who have begged you to come back and finish this. It is an excellent story. You've kept all the characters believable, true to what we all understand them to be in JKR's world.
I realize your real life has to have been so full that you have had to put this "on ice". I don't know if you ran into plotting problems as well, or other writing difficulties.
But I beg of you, PLEASE come back and finish this! You haven't even gotten to tell us what "The Pillar of Storge" IS! Please, PLEASE finish this wonderful book! Pretty please with a Slytherin hiss!
Just found this story tonight and had to finish it before I could go to bed. :) Thanks so much and I can't wait for the next update! :)
| Title: Chapter 34
| 02 Mar 2007 2:50 am
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| Reviewer: none (Anonymous)
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I really enjoy this story.
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