| Title: Light Shatters Darkness
| 17 Jul 2009 11:45 pm
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| Reviewer: sums96 (Anonymous)
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i loved this chapter!!!
this is an amzing story!!!
i cant belive snape just gave 50 points to the gryfindors!
=]
Oh, I love this! Especially that end part! And the scene with Snape! Gorgeous! I was almost crying! Thank you, it was beautiful!
-Elise
| Title: Light Shatters Darkness
| 17 May 2006 4:34 am
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| Reviewer: ph6fingeredman (Anonymous)
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I have not finished this chapter, or story yet, but just wanted to tell you of one small grammar mistake while I remembered. At the beginning of chapter 2 you say, "...a myriad of...." That is incorrect. If memory serves, you never combine 'of' with 'myriad.' The 'of' is inherant in the 'myriad.' All you need is, "... overwhelmed by myriad emotions..."
I do love all your stories, and I am sorry that I am such a grammar nazi, I just thought I'd let you know. I am truly addicted to all your wonderful tales. Keep 'em coming!
That was just wonderful. Haha I liked the betting game. And the 50pts. aww. good chapter. :)
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