I love it!!! Absolutely fantastic! great chapter, I especially like the last bit.
What an interesting start!
Harry's behaviour in this chapter reminds me of the deathly hallows book. It's a shame that Harry didn't realise how wrong he was...It's great that did he realise it so quickly in your story! :)
I love the friendly banter in this chappie..its so funny...I need a break from all that angst lol
heehee! Cute sev! Must admit I couldn't work out why Dumbledore twinkled - thought you must have deliberatly left out some conversation - till I read the next bit and looked back - really good slip up!x
Awww... that was so sweet.... the kiss was too, for me, because I always thought of Dumbledore as a fathery figur for Sev... I really like this chapter. I love your Sev., Off to the next chapter!!!
*big grin* I love it already! >
absolutely loved this chapter!!!!
Title: Unanticipated Apology
| 11 Nov 2006 10:27 pm
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Reviewer: MollyMorrison (Anonymous)
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OMG! FLIPPING AMAZING, I LOVE IT
Title: Unanticipated Apology
| 11 Nov 2006 10:27 pm
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Reviewer: MollyMorrison (Anonymous)
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OMG! FLIPPING AMAZING, I LOVE IT
This has become one of my favorite stories, I hope you will post the other chapters here soon, and can't wait to read the new ones.
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