Oh wow. This chapter was so very funy I had to stop reding twice. Awesome form. I love your Harry and Severus. Keep writing!!!
I have to admit, I'll accept Severus blushing to be very OOC, but humming? That is most definitely OOC.
o: Great chapter though! *grin*
The thing I love most about your fic as that you actually made Severus human. I like the interaction between him and Harry. Yes Snape is a little ooc but Harry is VERY IC I believe. Good job!
Snape blush? nah but I thought it was cute. hehe. nice chapter. :D
Awwww! This is sooo sweet so far! I love it! *grin* Sevvie is a little OOC, but in a good way, of course! lol, naturally, when we do one of these Harry and Severus fics, Sev tends to get a little OOC. *smirk* Not that that's a bad thing of course! *grin* Excellent job! Next chappie!!
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