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Reviews For Simply a Matter of Time
I'd give you a better rating, but I have to withhold judgement, don't I? I haven't seen enough. In ways, I wish you took more time to explain the reasons the Unspeakables acted the way they did. Like why Harry is redoing his first year, even if it is rather obvious why. *frowns* Oh, I don't know what I'm talking about! Just know I enjoyed reading hte story and look forward to reading more. Author's Response: Well, I do believe I had Razt mention that Hogwarts only accepts first years and no transfers. Since Harry would be a ward of the English ministry, they'd want to keep him in-state and thus couldn't send him to Beauxbatons or Durmstrang. As for the Unspeakables question... there's only one Unspeakable that you've met so far, except for the council which was briefly mentioned. Razt acts the way he does because that's the way he acts. As for the reactions of the regular wizarding world to the Unspeakables, that will be revealed... later. Razt and co will actually be returning in a later chapter, and more about the Unspeakable organization will be revealed then. Thank you for you review. Mila
Wow!!! Let me take this moment to say that i LOVE this story! Yay! A young Sev befriends Harry! *Grins* Excellent writing style, a nice mix of dialoug and description. :) Anyways, I am anxiously awaiting your next installment, Keep up the good work, Blessings, Vana
Oh, excellent! I love good time-travel stories, and yours is starting off really well :) It is quite unusual to have Harry go back in time so young, and I'm curious to see how it will change the plot. I look forward to more chapters :) |
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