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Reviews For The White Island
Heh, the islanders sound like Hufflepuffs -- hard-working and loyal. For some reason I think that the Grandmother was either Hermione or Ginny, although I'm leaning toward Hermione. I don't really know why, though. Anyway, I really like it. Keep writing, I want to see what happens. :)
I wonder who the three people are: the boy who could fly without wings (Harry?), the man who's heart bled (Severus?) (Remus?), the man who was dead (Deumbledore?) (Albus)?. Is the Moon lily or just a powerful being? I bet that the dog is Sirius. This is a lovely story so far. But did you mean for it to be a round robin? A round robin means that anyone else can write a second chapter to it, ir a third, or a fourth, all the way until it is completed. Author's Response: My dear dear dear Jan_AQ, As always you arethe first to give me support. I just love you! I am glad you liked it. It is a new theme for me too and I hope I am up to it. I also read the chapter more than 20 times to make sure it is right theme-wise, plot-wise, grammar, spellinga nd punctuation wise, and I have to admit I am so pleased with myself for the result. Ummm, no I didn't mean it to be a round robin. I will check in the profile and correct it. And no, I am not giving you any clues as to who is who! Thanks again
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