Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 7 23 Apr 2021 1:37 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry always the outsider, you are bringing his worries and uncertainties out very well
Title: Chapter 7 10 Apr 2012 6:04 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1592 (Signed) [Report This]
    indeed, the Potions Master at Hogwarts, is different to Severus Snape, father of nine .

    the only ones who probably ever sees the parental side of Severus are his Slytherins.


    wise decision to take things one step at a time Harry, for everything you knew or thought you knew about your Potions teacher are currently being challenged
Title: Chapter 7 17 Mar 2012 12:36 am
Reviewer: ceccecblue (Signed) [Report This]
    ARh no! It's such a shame that you've left it there, it has bags of potential.

    In terms of the plot, I'm not sure about the nine children, it makes reading it a bit confusing and hard work although saying that, it most have been even more confusing for you to write! I'll have to be content for now with making up the rest of it myself :D
    C x

    Author's Response:

    I have about 300 words of the next chapter wrote already. But I'm working on a fic for Lent at the moment (I don't know what I was thinking when I thought I would write a chapter a day for Lent!) and on my fic fest entry as well, so it may take a little while. But after Easter and the fic fest are over, this story will be my priority.

    And I cheat with Severus and Juliana's kids - I had a list I use of all of them with their ages. It makes things easier to keep track off. I had a massive gap when I didn't update this story due to changing computers and I lost all my stuff, including that list. It took me so long to figure out where I was and which order the kids went in! Do you think it would help other readers if I just uploaded a list like that in one of the notes?

    Thanks for reviewing - I'll have to keep you hanging on a little longer before I update again though.

Title: Chapter 7 27 Feb 2012 1:15 am
Reviewer: LucySnapeDaughter-Of-Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    I love your story! Like, adore it! I have read it so many times and it never seems to get old or any less amazing :)
    I started reading this the other day and was delighted to find that there had been an update, I have no idea why I wasn't sent an email telling me this but all the same. I was soo excited to find out what else you have in mind for Harry and the Snape family.
    So please please please don't leave us in suspense for as long this time as I want to find out what you have up your amazing sleeves for this story! :)
    Please update soon
    Lucyxxx

    Author's Response:

    Wow, I'm glad you like the story so much. I just wanted to do something that was really original.

    I have one or two paragraphs of the next chapter wrote, but it may take me a while to finish it, as I'm writing a chapter a day fic for Lent at the moment, and I also have my prompt fest story to write as well. This story will be updated at some point as well though!

    Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Chapter 7 13 Feb 2012 2:05 am
Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 (Signed) [Report This]
    *laughs* Now who sounds like a Slytherin? Keeping score, huh, Harry? This sound be interesting to see how long it takes for Severus and Juliana to realize that Harry has been lying and how long Harry can hold out.

    More please!
Title: Chapter 7 12 Feb 2012 6:14 am
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    very interesting...odd for Snape to be a father of so many... but i like this....
Title: Chapter 7 11 Feb 2012 10:52 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I love this I hoep to see more when you can thank you....
Title: Chapter 7 11 Feb 2012 5:41 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh poor confused Harry...please update again soon, I'm really enjoying this story!
Title: Chapter 7 11 Feb 2012 4:23 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it, update soon
Title: Chapter 7 11 Feb 2012 3:59 am
Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story so far, very different from others I've read. Nine kids? Now that was unexpected!

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