I'm liking this story and how it's written. I love the little bit of humor in the beginning of the second last paragraph. I hope to see a lot more of this humor in the rest of the story. Indeed very well written. Thank you for writing. 

I am so mortified... yet so INTRIGUED. The moment I saw the summary I knew I had to read it -- I didn't know what I was getting myself into, if I would even like it... but I had to read it. And I LOVE it. I admit I laughed through most of it, as inappropriate as that may be... but wow. Haha. Snape spanking Harry. Not something you see every day. I'm sorry, but you may just be getting a ton of reviews from me (each chapter).

As for your writing skills - you are phenominal. This is really your first fanfic? D-A-M-N. You are GOOD! There have been a couple of spelling mistakes, but you're only human. Your technique is great too. I'm sorry these are run-of-the-mill points that I'm bringing up, but I hope to come across as being very impressed, because you are REALLY good.

Great Chapter.

Harry will never learn. How does he think he can get past the wards, Snape just made them stronger and they probably already went off alerting Snape.

I would not want to be Harry when Snape get a hold of him.