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Title: Chapter 2 - A Bath and Breakfast 28 Mar 2013 5:05 pm
Reviewer: kspence (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is very good.
Title: Chapter 2 - A Bath and Breakfast 13 Feb 2011 9:29 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    I think Snape and Harry both are a little too out of canon here, but I like the idea of Harry searching for the necklaces so I'll continue on.
Title: Chapter 2 - A Bath and Breakfast 02 Jul 2008 7:38 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    What a funny--and even in its own way, loving--bath! That was delightful!
Title: Chapter 2 - A Bath and Breakfast 10 May 2008 6:37 pm
Reviewer: honilee@LJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really liked how you characterized the Dursleys, especially Petunia. Usually I find that she's being portrayed as subserviant to Vernon and here you show a more equal relationship. I really liked how she said, "Don't be ridiculous," as she tossed her cleaning rag aside; she just seemed in charge.

    The cleaning speel Snape uses on Harry is also very clever.
Title: Chapter 2 - A Bath and Breakfast 01 May 2008 12:20 am
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow this story is enthralling!
Title: Chapter 2 - A Bath and Breakfast 06 May 2006 11:13 pm
Reviewer: Jane Doe (Anonymous) [Report This]

    This chapter was weird, funny and… well… weird. I like your writing style: it is interesting, and, as I see it, inventive. I’m not really a big fan of spanking stories, but this is truly well-written.

Title: Chapter 2 - A Bath and Breakfast 13 Feb 2006 4:40 pm
Reviewer: Carrie (Signed) [Report This]
    This is an excellent story!  I love it!  I like Snape and Harry stories, especially the ones where they don't get along.  Spanking is no problem for me.  Who better to do it than Snape?  Harry needs a little tough love now and then.  Please, keep up the great work!
Title: Chapter 2 - A Bath and Breakfast 12 Feb 2006 6:37 pm
Reviewer: greeneyes (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a wonderful story.  I especially like your take on a reluctantly caring Snape.  Is he going to find out about the Dursleys?  They don't seem as bad here as in other stories, but locking a child in a cupboard and starving him for years is abuse no matter how you cut it.  Thank you, and please continue!
Title: Chapter 2 - A Bath and Breakfast 10 Feb 2006 7:30 pm
Reviewer: Mairead (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like this story; it has a unique flavour that combines familiar and comforting ideas with new and original themes. I look forward to seeing its continuation
Title: Chapter 2 - A Bath and Breakfast 09 Feb 2006 5:39 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I love it! Great! The bath morning wash spell was great! The haircut and then th elotion and powder- A spell for mothers with too many children? HAHA! LOL poor Harry! Awesome chapter. You have a great Snape! I am also enjoying your Harry a lot. The time turner story just thickens the plot- Yay a plot! Great story so far! :D

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