Harry seems to be way out of character... he id behaving oddly ungratful, arrogant and Malfoyish. Did you intend him to be OOC or does it have something to do with his fever that Snape is concerned about? I hope I'm not coming of as critiquing your work, I'm just trying to understand his behavior. I love your work, very nicely written.  

Bloody freakin' brilliant!

I can't get enough of this :D You are SO good. It is OCC-ish to a point, but it's so good that it doesn't even matter.

Btw, I noticed that you tend to (not all the time, but there have been a few times up to this point) interchange 'him' and 'his'. Not too distracting, but in case no one pointed that out to you, I thought you may want to know.

Great story!!!!! I really like this story a lot. Plus Snape is still in character. Keep it up!!!!!

Woot! Great chapter! There were lots of typos though.

I loved all of Harry's thoughts about the black bag and conking Snape over the head with it. XD But poor Harry, seems he's sick but only Snape thinks it's bad. I wonder if Harry will really try to run away and if he will succeed. Harry's comments about Madame Pomfrey and being sick were so cute in a rudish matter of fact way. Harry's too precious. I like your version of him! Snape's putting up with a lot. But what happens next? Wah, I want more!

Good, very good story!

I like the way you make Snape care for little Harry even if, in the beginning he didn' t want to... ;)

I know i'm bad but i wish Harry got very ill so Snape can play "nurse". Perhaps in this moment Snape could find some truths about Harry that will make see him in another light.

As you are the master, i will wait for the next chapter so please update ASAP!!!!!