OMG!  What's going on with Harry?  Nothing good!  What a cliffie!  Hope you can update soon!  I just love the relationship you have created with Harry and Snape.  Hope they can find out what's wrong with Harry.  Glad Snape told him though.

And chalk up another spanking.  Woo-hoo!

Oh my gosh!!! WOAH! Well then, THAT was a cliff hanger. Woah.

Wow. Well back to the chapter, :) I feel that your Snape is very much in character, but more so than that, he's interesting. He does as expected but his dialouge isn't old, it's fresh and you handle him very well. I feel that he's a little blank, but I believe that that's mostly because it's from Harry's POV; And the type of POV you have is more similar to JKR's who describes everything except the little itty details of people's motives and feelings inside. While I usually enjoy the style that shows more of the inside, I also enjoy your style as well- it helps keep your story different and unique- some way that makes it stand out from the others even slightly is good in a genre with so many similar fics and you managed to stand out on your own and follow your own plan very well. I really look forward to reading more from you!

I like that Harry's sick- the instant combustion was a super surprise! I wonder what Snape's going to do, I wonder what Harry's illness is and if it's connected to the floo in any way. I really liked the garden scene, how Harry was able to rest and read the book, but most especially how you are taking your time to develop the plot and story, not rushing into the next part right away. It's nice. I almost felt like I was in the garden too. Thank you.

And I just want to mention again that I really like your Snape.