Ooh, I loved the time-out. Snape was soo perfect there! I think Harry should continue to stand in the corner if he misbehaves, it was really funny too read!

 I wonder what will happen to Harry now. Snape is probably angry at Harry for being late. Will Harry get a spanking now? Really miss them:)

 Update soon!/7 Cissi

Nice chapter.  Teenagers do seem to have attitude problems.  I hope Snape realizes that Harry has a lot of emotional problems.

Awesome! Amazing! Love it! The banter and all the thoughts were done very well- clever and very much in character. I love the plot, it was a great chapter, lots of stuff happened. Everything was great. The dream in the beginning was a great touch, I loved how Harry carried the hair brush into the bathroom like a bat, ready to smack anything that attacked him. XD The time out was such a shock to Harry and me! Poor Harry! I loved Harry thoughts about Snape being his Guardian, it was very fluid and engaging. I really followed it easily without guessing it beforehand. Great stuff! And now Snape's mad and coming to get him! LOL@ that he's carrying the schedule. Great description there.

Thanks so much for writing and posting this chapter! It rocks. A couple of typos but that's it.

The plot and action are not slow at all! Chapters like this one helped developing the characters, the interaction between them and their insights. I really like that you take your time building the story and not rushing it. That's the only way one can accept Harry's changing feelings towards the Potions Master without being OOC. Great work! Hope you can update really soon, can´t wait for the next chapter (the talk about consequences and the essay sound like a lot of fun)