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Reviews For A Time and Place to Grow
The Immobulus thing! That seemed a little...cruel. I mean it wasn't cruel to Immobulus him in the first place, a little impatient maybe, but not cruel. But leaving him Immobulized while you're at a Death Eater is mean. Poor Harry. I have these little seisures at night that force me to stay Immobulized from anywhere from a minute all the way up until my body slips into a sleep after being exhausted, much like the Immobulus you have in this story. I guess for most ppl it's cool but for me i'm like *biting nails* *cringe* *cringe* oh noooo! loool Cuz I hate having those seizures. Like especially when houses around my house were being ransacked, I was so scared someone would try to rob our house while I was in the middle of a seizure not able to move anything or talk, but could hear everything. so yea lol, it seemed cruel in my opinion, but as you see, my opinion is a bit strong because I understand how it feels, but for most ppl it's prob nothing. Especially because most people can't get through Sev's wards around the house and Sev would prob risk his life before letting anyone touch Harry. Just me being overly analytical again!
Hehehe, that's why I love the sequel to this when Harry is like "His potions store Hermione! It was his potions store!" looool love this chapter, just love how their relationship is starting to mold. I think Harry's so called "punishment" with Sev for 3 days is really helping them. WEEEEEE!!!! On to the next! I'm so weird...
Oh… now wasn’t that harsh? I am actually speechless… I guess the punishment was IC for Snape… What can I say…? You’ve got a really funny story here!
Wow! Harry's punushment was a big one! I can't believe Snape has been called to a meeting...I wonder what will happen. Thank god you didn't do another big cliff hanger, i might have died with anticipation! Amazin, keep them comin! Kirsty x
Poor Harry, It will not be easy to around Snape for two more days... Harry seems sleepy for potion, deatheater meeting, that means only one thing, he will very possible get vision… I want learn what will happen…. Please update soon.
Oh, I'm so glad to see an update from you. I missed seeing you last week. Perfect chapter! Harry sooo had it coming, it wasn't funny. Is he still immobilized though? I don't remember seeing Snape releasing him. Poor Harry always must do things the hard way. If he'd just taken the tar like sludge in the first place.....
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