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Title: Chapter 8 - Cleaning Up 22 May 2011 3:44 am
Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh yea! I wanted to add one more thing!
    The Immobulus thing! That seemed a little...cruel. I mean it wasn't cruel to Immobulus him in the first place, a little impatient maybe, but not cruel. But leaving him Immobulized while you're at a Death Eater is mean. Poor Harry.
    I have these little seisures at night that force me to stay Immobulized from anywhere from a minute all the way up until my body slips into a sleep after being exhausted, much like the Immobulus you have in this story.
    I guess for most ppl it's cool but for me i'm like *biting nails* *cringe* *cringe* oh noooo! loool Cuz I hate having those seizures. Like especially when houses around my house were being ransacked, I was so scared someone would try to rob our house while I was in the middle of a seizure not able to move anything or talk, but could hear everything.
    so yea lol, it seemed cruel in my opinion, but as you see, my opinion is a bit strong because I understand how it feels, but for most ppl it's prob nothing. Especially because most people can't get through Sev's wards around the house and Sev would prob risk his life before letting anyone touch Harry.
    Just me being overly analytical again!
Title: Chapter 8 - Cleaning Up 22 May 2011 3:30 am
Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) [Report This]
    I like this chapter a lot because it seems like this is the point where Sev starts turning more fatherly and all git of the dungeon-ish. I also like that Harry realizes that already he has some sort of affection for Sev and he feels safe with Sev. I still can't believe he was dumb enough to go in the potion's store. I mean seriously! Sev is a POTIONS MASTER, not some common guardian! The man LIVES for potions, and you go into his potion's store! smh...well, I guess he learned.
    Hehehe, that's why I love the sequel to this when Harry is like "His potions store Hermione! It was his potions store!" looool
    love this chapter, just love how their relationship is starting to mold. I think Harry's so called "punishment" with Sev for 3 days is really helping them. WEEEEEE!!!! On to the next!
    I'm so weird...
Title: Chapter 8 - Cleaning Up 25 Feb 2008 7:22 pm
Reviewer: lily (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry I totally expected him to started crying "I want my mommy" after the spanking. He's so cute.
Title: Chapter 8 - Cleaning Up 06 May 2006 11:14 pm
Reviewer: Jane Doe (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Oh… now wasn’t that harsh? I am actually speechless… I guess the punishment was IC for Snape… What can I say…? You’ve got a really funny story here!

Title: Chapter 8 - Cleaning Up 28 Mar 2006 9:25 pm
Reviewer: Noone (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Wow! Harry's punushment was a big one! I can't believe Snape has been called to a meeting...I wonder what will happen. Thank god you didn't do another big cliff hanger, i might have died with anticipation! Amazin, keep them comin!

     Kirsty x

Title: Chapter 8 - Cleaning Up 28 Mar 2006 6:57 pm
Reviewer: Catti666 (Signed) [Report This]

    Poor Harry, It will not be easy to around Snape for two more days... Harry seems sleepy for potion, deatheater meeting, that means only one thing, he will very possible get vision… I want learn what will happen…. Please update soon.

Title: Chapter 8 - Cleaning Up 27 Mar 2006 7:15 am
Reviewer: Rai (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Oh, I'm so glad to see an update from you.  I missed seeing you last week.

     Perfect chapter!  Harry sooo had it coming, it wasn't funny.   Is he still immobilized though? I don't remember seeing Snape releasing him.   

    Poor Harry always must do things the hard way.  If he'd just taken the tar like sludge in the first place.....

Title: Chapter 8 - Cleaning Up 27 Mar 2006 7:10 am
Reviewer: bella (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love Karen's idea of an undeserved punishment and how Snape deals with that afterwards... but it´s your story and I'm sure whatever you include in it will be brilliant as ever. Looking forward to read next chapter...
Title: Chapter 8 - Cleaning Up 27 Mar 2006 6:15 am
Reviewer: blue artemis (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Interesting take on the whole thing.
Title: Chapter 8 - Cleaning Up 25 Mar 2006 8:19 am
Reviewer: Hey_Zelra (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story. Update soon.

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