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Title: Chapter 9 - Thoughts about the Future 30 Mar 2006 11:44 pm
Reviewer: Angie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I love how it has a cliffy at the end. When leaving for diagon ally is Harry in disguised or is he not. Great story!
Title: Chapter 9 - Thoughts about the Future 30 Mar 2006 10:35 pm
Reviewer: Origanum (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great: I read the manual last night. Really great. Snape is exactly how he has to be, I think. You're putting him down very good, he has a believeble character in this story. But I constantly think that Harry is a little boy, much younger than 15. Though, he grows when you go on with the story. I enjoy it! Keep writing!:D
Title: Chapter 9 - Thoughts about the Future 30 Mar 2006 10:31 pm
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]

    The last part was so funny, especially Snape saying "Yes, Potter, I know how to drive. I read the manual last night." Maybe Harry will get to drive once Snape realises that it takes more than reading a manual to actually drive.

    I hope Harry realises soon that Snape cares for him even if he wouldn't admit it right now. Harry just does not learn. He is still being punished and already plans the next misdeed. He is going to be in so much trouble when Snape will catch him.

    At least he could also try to get some potion ingredients when looking for the timeturner!

    Isn't it dangerous for Snape to be seen with Harry during summer because of the other deatheaters?

    Please update soon!

Title: Chapter 9 - Thoughts about the Future 30 Mar 2006 10:03 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia (Anonymous) [Report This]

    As I'm always saying, a great chapter! Hope you update soon!

    Just a question, will Snape ever spank Harry bare bottom?


    Author's Response: I'm not sure yet. That would be very up-close and personal - not quite sure I could make it believable. I'll think on it, though.

Title: Chapter 9 - Thoughts about the Future 30 Mar 2006 8:42 pm
Reviewer: you know who (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Great chapter …I love your story so much. sorry I didn’t review for the pervious chapter..i’ve been so depressed these days L. I didn’t expect to see this story updated when I visited the site today…it really made me happy to see a new chapter.

    LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!and your story.

    Ps:will snape get fined?he doesn’t have a driving licence.does he?  

Title: Chapter 9 - Thoughts about the Future 30 Mar 2006 4:40 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I enjoyed the interaction between Snape and Harry in this chapter.  The story seems to be flowing faster now, and the end of the chapter was hilarious--even if not quite believable.  I can't see Snape really knowing how to rent a car without knowing that it takes more than an owner's manual to be able to actually drive.  But I will suspend disbelief for the fun of it.
Title: Chapter 9 - Thoughts about the Future 30 Mar 2006 1:31 pm
Reviewer: azamystic (Anonymous) [Report This]

    omg. we don't need to worry about voldie killing harry. snape will do it for us. omg. omg omg. harry's gonna die! tell me harry took driver's ed at somepoint!

Title: Chapter 9 - Thoughts about the Future 30 Mar 2006 7:02 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    Hahaha!!! I love this story so much. XD I love all the sarcasim and snark and the way Harry's giving as good as he gets. Wonderful! I think I like the banter and communication between the two the best, although you also do a fantastic job with the feelings, events and characterization and thoughts. Just all around a wonderful story. The "I am going to die" line reminds me so much of my story. XD

    My favourite lines:

    "Suspicious member," Harry muttered

    LOL!

    "By locking this with this key, the manor can not be unlocked by anyone else but me holding this key. That way I don’t have to worry about coming home to a house full of dementors."

    hehe. Awesome chapter and aweosme story! Thanks so much for sharing it! *_* I'll e-mail you a list of typos.
     

Title: Chapter 9 - Thoughts about the Future 30 Mar 2006 6:37 am
Reviewer: MinervaGranger (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Harry is going to get another spanking before long, if his attitude doesn't improve, isn't he? What a Great chapter. Keep it coming.
Title: Chapter 9 - Thoughts about the Future 30 Mar 2006 6:32 am
Reviewer: Hey_Zelra (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL!! He's never driven before?!? LOL!! Update soon!

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