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Title: Chapter 10 - An Outing to Diagon Alley 12 Apr 2006 12:04 am
Reviewer: Angie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story!! I love how your going to keep going with the story. I really hope that it keeps going untill after he finishes a year of school. But its your story so what ever you think is best. Love your story!!!! Update real soon!
Title: Chapter 10 - An Outing to Diagon Alley 11 Apr 2006 11:17 pm
Reviewer: belle (Anonymous) [Report This]

    (Standing and cheering) More chapters!!! Yay!!!

    Love your story, and hope we get lots of it (keep this going through school year please, I'm really looking forward to see the interaction between Snape and Harry in Hogwarts after this summer together). Don't bring Sirius back! That's so wrong... I'm sure you'll make Snape explain to Harry the dangers of playing with time (after some good smacks I hope), this is one of his stupidest ideas!

Title: Chapter 10 - An Outing to Diagon Alley 11 Apr 2006 2:38 pm
Reviewer: dubdigit (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm a little curious to see how you have Harry get into Malfoy Mannor to get it. I would think Lucious Malfoy would have his home pretty well warded so that even Draco couldn't touch those items. Please update soon, because as you know, curiousity killed the cat.
Title: Chapter 10 - An Outing to Diagon Alley 11 Apr 2006 2:25 pm
Reviewer: Marion (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Oh, foolish, foolish Harry :-) One thing you can say for him: he's tenacious. Once he gets an idea in his head, no matter how foolish, he will follow up on it. The sad thing about this Sirius thing is: Sirius would probably make a very bad parental figure. Let's face it, even before Azkaban he was a flighty, unreliable character with a cruel streak a mile wide. Not that he would intentionally harm Harry, but he would forget things like supper or bedtimes when tinkering with his magical motorbike or snogging his latest girlfriend. Harry suffers from something all children who lost their parents before age ten, eleven suffer from: he has never interacted with them as a hormonal, rebellious teenager. Very young children see their parents as supergood and allknowing. This changes of course when they become teenagers and again when they mature. It's all a matter of natural progress. But Harry is stuck in the 'my parents were supergood and allknowing' phase, because all he has to go on is a photo from when he's a toddler and his hopeful childhood fantasies. The same with Sirius. He hardly ever interacted with Sirius, let alone on a daily, ordinary basis. He transferred the superdad fantasy onto Sirius, but this experience as Snape's ward is closer to a real and true parent-teenager relation that anything he could have with Sirius. At least Snape is trustworthy. Sirius is too flighty by half. So even if he did manage to get his hands on that necklace (which I doubt), he would be severely disappointed. Can't wait to see him planning and plotting, though :-) "I don't plot anything", indeed!

    Heh, I somehow hope that for some reason or another (can't think *how*, but I hope nonetheless) Snape will turn into a giant canary or something. Snape will think Harry has fed him a Canary Cream and Harry can't say "I never went to Fred and Georges' shop" because he will then have to 'fess up going to Borgin and Burkes. Hah! Am I really so evil I want to see Harry in trouble with Snape? YES! I am!!

Title: Chapter 10 - An Outing to Diagon Alley 11 Apr 2006 12:48 pm
Reviewer: felinedreams (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thank you for the update (I wish you'd write faster, though ;). The chapter was lovely. It seems that Harry's going to get into trouble the next chapter... I'd love to see how his brilliant 'plan' would turn out.
Title: Chapter 10 - An Outing to Diagon Alley 11 Apr 2006 9:53 am
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I can't believe Harry is planing to go over to Malfoy Manor. Is he out of his mind. He can't sereiously believe that he is going to succeed. He could expose Severus as a spy. He deserves everythings that he gets if Severus catches him. Please update soon. Will Harry already try next chapter to get into Malfoy Manor?
Title: Chapter 10 - An Outing to Diagon Alley 11 Apr 2006 8:59 am
Reviewer: Kasey (Anonymous) [Report This]

    This story is very enjoyable, I love Snape's character.  You manage to keep him in character while at the same time have him and Harry start a relationship (sorta).  Great job, and update soon.

Title: Chapter 10 - An Outing to Diagon Alley 11 Apr 2006 6:27 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    WOW. Oh man, Harry, what's gotten into you? Going to Malfoy Manor? He's going to be killed! I hope that snape's smart enough to save him!! Oh man, oh man. I think I want to wring his little neck. Wow. You are developing this little mischeif maker marvelously! Great character development, great bridging of the thoughts. I love how Harry gets away with some things. I love their banter. I'm so glad that Snape really knew how to drive! XD Awesome story. Thanks for posting a new chapter! I've been waiting for it. :)

    Author's Response: What? No typos? I'm speechless. No, really, I love your comments and appreciate your help. I'm still waiting for your to update your own story!

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