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Reviews For A Time and Place to Grow
Loved the chapter. Harry is in so much trouble. will he ever learn. Lying and trying to coverup things you do never works. You always get it in the "end" Please up date soon.
As always, great chapter. I like that Harry is starting to feel safe around Snape and that he feels bad about lying. They´re definitely making progress. I don´t think your chapter is bad, actually.Your filler is really funny. There are a number of typos, you might want to correct them.Looking forward to the next chapter!
In the doorway stood a very cross-looking, very displeased, very stern Snape looking straight at Harry and Dobby. ooooooh*shivers* And: "Oh, and Potter," Snape turned back, his hand on the door handle, "if I find that you’ve been lying to me after I gave you four chances to tell the truth, I will take your trousers down and tan your hide with my ruler until you can’t sit down for two days. Good night." Another very good line:P I don't think this chapter was bad! I think Snape was brilliant and Harry starting o get guilty about the things he has done. Wonder if he's gonna confess to Snape? Great chapter, but I want to know what's gonna happen to Harry, so hurry up with the next chapter! :D
Harry will be in so much trouble. As you let Harry think about all his other lies , is Snape going to find out? It would be great if a concerned Dobby lets it slip that Harry is a just a bit too interested in Malfoy Manor. Well if Harry is going on like this he won't be able to sit down for the rest of summer. Will he be back on being treated like a little kid, staying with Snape 24/7?
Please update soon! Are you always going to update every 2 weeks from now on instead of every week?
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