Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 03 Dec 2023 9:42 am
Reviewer: Treedweller (Signed) [Report This]
    Favorite line:

    Snape replied calmly. "I understand that you don’t want me to think you’re always in the wrong, but again we could have talked about that last night after you told me the truth. The time for talking and making excuses is over. If you had even come to me this morning or told me at breakfast that the house elf was here, I would have understood. But you were caught, and now you want to squirm out of it. I know you’re used to adults escaping their promises to you or letting you get away with disobedience because they don’t want to bother with reprimanding you. I know their avoidance makes you feel cheated and ill-used, and I refuse to let you feel that way about my guardianship. I intend to keep my promises to you, which includes punishing you for lying. No need to thank me, just come here and show how appreciative you are that I keep my word."
Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 03 Dec 2023 9:34 am
Reviewer: Treedweller (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm binge reading this, AGAIN. This has got to be my favorite fanfiction story. The dialog is both witty and clever, and at times also logical and deep: I laugh and cry alternatively throughout. Aaaand I'm a sucker for d-fic so it really hits the spot. Thank you
Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 08 Jan 2008 8:02 am
Reviewer: Malora (Signed) [Report This]
    "Scowling and groaning and feeling awful in general..."

    Ha ha. I love that line. I love the whole chapter. Harry is so adorable and hilarious. The entire fic is great, but this chapter makes me smile every time. Great job!
Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 25 Oct 2007 8:42 pm
Reviewer: paheli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    "Harry fidgeted, nearly stomping his foot in frustration. "Already I won’t be able to sit for two days."

    Snape’s expression softened the tiniest bit."
    That bit was so cute. Harry is such a cutey pie. Finally someone to treat him like the child he is!
Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 09 Oct 2007 9:20 pm
Reviewer: paheli (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry I feel so sorry for him. He is just so cute when he's sad though.
Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 27 Jun 2006 3:42 pm
Reviewer: Origanum (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow.. That's a very smart idea of him. Hopefully he will succeed!
Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 21 Jun 2006 12:02 am
Reviewer: Cecilia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Gaaah, you need to update NOW!!
Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 18 Jun 2006 7:04 pm
Reviewer: Noone (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh my! This is it! *bites lip* I can't wait to see how far he gets!! I love this story! I read A painful gaurdianship and i like this story better! kirsty x
Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 14 Jun 2006 6:19 am
Reviewer: nighting gal (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a really goodstory.
    It has kept me interested from the begining.
    Keep up the really good work because this is great.
    I look forward ti your next instalment. (Which I hope is soon!)
    Does Harry see anyone else during the summer?
    How far into the summer is this story at this point?
    Good job! Update Soon!
Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 08 Jun 2006 10:24 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Well, I do think that the spankings are working, but Harry thinks that getting his parents back are worth all the trouble (and maybe a sore butt):D. if you haven't received discipline in a very long time, it is very hard to adjust when you finally get it, because you're so used to doing whatever you want to without consequenses. Hopefully the spankings and other punishment like washing the mouth with soap(I'm still waiting!) But after this little adventure, I hope that Harry finally learns to listen to Snape and obey him some more.

     Sorry for my poor english

     

    cissi


Disclaimer Charm: Harry Potter and all related works including movie stills belong to J.K. Rowling, Scholastic, Warner Bros, and Bloomsbury. Used without permission. No copyright infringement is intended. No money is being made off of this site. All fanfiction and fanart are the property of the individual writers and artists represented on this site and do not represent the views and opinions of the Webmistress.

Powered by eFiction 3.5