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Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 08 Jun 2006 4:44 am
Reviewer: AchillesMonkey (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You know, the spankings don't seem to be working very well. Harry still goes and does whatever he thinks is best. The time-outs seem to work more efficiently. I think Harry needs more time in the corner to think about all he's done. After all, he's sixteen and, if given the time to think about it, would probably come to the conclusion that what he's done was wrong. Of course, giving him time to think about it would give him time to justify his actions to himself, so it might not work. Though, it couldn't hurt to try. So my vote is that Harry needs more time-outs and less spanking. And maybe a few essays on lying and such.
Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 07 Jun 2006 9:56 pm
Reviewer: PP (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am enjoying your story so much!! This was such a cliff hanger--I cannot wait for the next installment.
Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 07 Jun 2006 4:54 pm
Reviewer: catti666 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ops, now there's no turning back in way or another... I just hope things won't get too bad... or on another hand I hope it gets  bad as any angst-freak should hope for, hahaha. I certainly hope to see new chapter soon!
Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 05 Jun 2006 10:35 pm
Reviewer: Casey (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Does Harry get through the barrier or doesn't he? ahh what a cliffhanger! You're on holiday for 10 days?? Oh well you'll just have to keep me in suspense. Great story, i really wish Harry would grow up a bit and i found myself siding with Snape rather than Harry in their arguments (not knocking your story at all) its great, update as soon as you can.
Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 05 Jun 2006 12:57 pm
Reviewer: anonomous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    For gods sake UDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 04 Jun 2006 3:28 am
Reviewer: sweets2 (Anonymous) [Report This]

    More, soon....please update must read more.  Snape is going to be pissed when he finds out that Harry left.  I don't think this will bode well at all.  I don't think the necklace does extally as told in the stories. 

    I think Harry is in for 3 things

    1)Major dissapointment

    2) A huge punishment

    3) Getting ill and during the punishment.

Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 02 Jun 2006 2:03 pm
Reviewer: Marion (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Oh, I forgot... Please take care in the increasing severity of punishments. We don't want to see this wonderful story turn into a punishmentfest after all.. (this is not a critiscism, just, you know, a friendly nudge)

Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 02 Jun 2006 2:00 pm
Reviewer: Marion (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Well, Harry still hasn't learned to curb his impulses, to put limits on his own behaviour and to *think* before he acts. Oh, he *thinks* allright, he thinks on how to do what he wants to do, but he doesn't think about wether what he wants is *right*. He doesn't think about *consequences*.

    So he changed his appearances from dark to blonde, did he? He ended up looking like Draco Malfoy, perhaps? And since Snape increased his wards, he will not only bounce off them, but bounce right into Snape's waiting arms. Hm. Perhaps Harry will now learn that Snape has no trouble punishing Draco for trespassing?

    On another note: if Harry stopped to think about that necklace for a minute, he would realise that if it really worked as he thinks/hopes it does, then Lucius Malfoy would have used it to change the past a long time ago: he could've travelled to the past and changed Voldemort's fate. Or Narcissa could have changed the past and kept Lucius out of Azkaban. So either neither Malfoy want to change these things or the necklace does not work the way Harry thinks it does. As usual with these kind of things, there are prices to pay and consequences to their use.

    Harry really needs to talk to Snape. *After* a good tongue-lashing of course. Amongst other things :-)

    I loved Snape's little speech and Harry's reaction to it. Harry is starting to get affected by Snape's lessons in civil behaviour, I'm glad to see. Good behaviour is it's own reward and a civil upbringing instills a internalized monitor (we usually call it our concience) which makes us feel guilty when we break the rules. I'm so glad Harry felt bad when Snape said "I'm very disappointed in you mr Potter". The old Harry wouldn't have cared less, I'm afraid... :-)

Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 31 May 2006 10:37 pm
Reviewer: Saphire Starlet (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Oh please PLEASE update soon!  What  a cliff hanger!  I can't wait for the next chapter!

     Saphire Starlet

Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 31 May 2006 8:56 pm
Reviewer: miracle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    its awesome and its getting better and better keep writing i cant wait for the next chapter!!!!

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