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Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 31 May 2006 2:53 am
Reviewer: belle (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Thanks for a great chapter! I'm so hoping you can update before your vacations... and a longer chapter (keeps hoping...)

    I think, as a lot of your reviewers, that it's time for Snape to sit Harry for a long long talk (and this time actually talk), but as Snape is so adamant about keeping his promises I asume Harry will not be too comfortable sitting during any conversation...

    Keep the great work!

Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 31 May 2006 2:32 am
Reviewer: Amaruk Wolfheart (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Oh my goodness! Oh my goodness! The suspense is bloddy well going to kill me! I love this story - it's so awesome and fun and well-written and amusing and suspenseful and...and...and awesome! Really awesome! And I love it! I so cannot wait for the next chapter!!!

    ((...Um. That was rather a lot of exclamation marks. ^_^;;; Apologies!))

Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 31 May 2006 12:57 am
Reviewer: thee_unknown_factor (Anonymous) [Report This]
    EviL! ack! so evil! hey, do you have an aproximation as to how long this will be??
Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 30 May 2006 11:23 pm
Reviewer: azamystic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Harry! What is wrong with you! Listen to your better judgement. Listen to the little voice in the back of you head, please! Anywho, great chapter, I enjoyed it. Poor Harry, you can't help but feel sorry for him. I wonder how things are going to go over at Malfoy Manor. Heh, he'll probably stay for more than an hour and change back and Draco be like, OMG! That would be hilarious. Or he get what he wanted, go back to Snape Manor, and the barriers be defective, and Snape not know, and Harry be so guilt ridden he tells him anyways. Or, how about I let you tell it? lol. Thanks, and, as always, Update soon!
Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 30 May 2006 8:21 pm
Reviewer: AlyssaEde (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Update soon ! This was a great chapter
Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 30 May 2006 3:40 pm
Reviewer: youngwrider (Anonymous) [Report This]

    As much as I enjoyed that, these fellas really need to talk.  Snape said he increased the wards.  I hope they bounce Harry back in to his office and they have it out.  Harry can explain that he wanted to tell Snape, but he couldn't because he thought Snape would stop him because of his hatred for Sirius.  And Snape can explain that he would stop him because it is an incredibly stupid and reckless plan.  I don't think Harry should be spanked for this though.  In fact I think Harry should secure a promise that he won't be spanked before he confesses.  But please have him confess.  I really would hate to see he or Snape hurt at Malfoy Manor because of this.  This chapter did end in a scary way.  AhH!  You are killing me!  But you do have me hooked.  Nice job.

Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 30 May 2006 1:10 pm
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Wow I sometimes wonder about Harry's logic: "Even with Snape insisting on no more lying – that was really Fate telling Harry that he needed to move now so he would no longer be lying. " I don't think Snape will see it Harry's way.

    I really thought a few capters ago that Harry started to turn sensible. At least he was feeling bad about lying and destroying Snape's things. And actually he was planing how to break into Malfoy manor. Not that it was a good idea anyway. But at least he didn't rush into it without thinking. But now he just runs off. This is never going to work! has he even any idea how the necklace looks like. And I'm sure Narcissa won't show off such a dark and forbidden oject just to a stranger. And I do not believe that even Sirius would laugh about Harry endangering his life so often.

    Poor Snape he will have his hands full to make sure Harry survives hair rising schemes. I really like how Snape stays in character. I like him being strict with Harry but also explaining to Harry what he did wrong. The scolding seems to start to affect Harry. It shows that Snape really cares about Harry and tries to teach him. I wonder that the alarm bells didn't start wringing for Snape when Harry thanked him.

    I wonder if after this stunt Harry will be put back in restriction as it really seems Snape can't trust him to be by himself and behave. Harry will be in so much trouble when snape catches him. But I hope when that happens that Harry will finally confess everything. So that he can talk to Snape about Sirius or get some outside help to deal with Sirius death.

    Please update before you leave!

     

Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 30 May 2006 12:15 pm
Reviewer: Emilia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh no!Harry´s plan will fail spectacularly, I´m sure and its a very dangerous thing to do. Poor Snape, I can´t help feeling sorry for him with the way Harry acts. You did an amazing job with your story and this chapter. The way Harry thanks Snape just incase.
    Please update before your trip. That would be really great!
Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 30 May 2006 6:03 am
Reviewer: JadedColonel (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Harry is an idiot if he thinks he'll get away with it.

    And his plan. I don't think it'll work. Snape would get to him before he could he even try.

    Update soon.

Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying 30 May 2006 5:40 am
Reviewer: Angie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was a great chapter.
    Harry never learns does he.
    Keep it up beacuse you are doing great.
    Update real soon.

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