| Title: Chapter 15 - Malfoy Manor
| 22 Jun 2006 5:25 am
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| Reviewer: Carolina (Anonymous)
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Seems like some people can't see the last line... I can: Sirius says: "I had Wondered where you'd gone to." I didn't find it confusing at all... just a lovely story development. But I DO agree we need an update soon... ;) C
| Title: Chapter 15 - Malfoy Manor
| 22 Jun 2006 5:19 am
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| Reviewer: Carolina Casaril (Anonymous)
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Hi, Getting better. Started a little immaturely with the spanking etc. although I DO see what you were trying to get at, finally. At least, the way I see it, Snape does what he knows, even it is a bit 'retro' and out of character, and learns it doesn't always work. I was always wondering that he would have any contact with a child, and would have thought punishment was at a more complex and difficult to understand level for Harry, instead of primal... but the contradictions it creates in snape is proving interesting, especially as Snape seems to be 'maturing' out of it himself, and accepting that mindless punishment is not as effective, rewarding or efficient as the things he could come up with... and Snape is not one to waste time, or avoid a complex thought process required to actually relate the bad action with the consequence so harry has a punishment related to his misconduct, not unrelated, and learns the Action-reaction consequence... anyway, I guess I've read some very comprehensive Snape character development in other fanfics and have an already broad and comprehensive personal view of him! Am trying to reconcile that with your Snape, and give your Snape a little more intelligence, accuteness, precision and 'depth' than so far portrayed in your fic. Still, I want to know how Snape and Harry will then interact at school... planning on going that far? Casaril@hotmail.com
| Title: Chapter 15 - Malfoy Manor
| 22 Jun 2006 2:23 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Wha!!! That was AWESOME!!! Wow. Holy cow. You did a really great job with Narcissa, I can't believe that Harry really pulled it off, tried to steal the necklace and is still alive! LOL. And then when Snape found him.. oh ho! But then you threw in a little twist, Snape was ready to give up. Was he really? Or was he just bluffing to get through to Harry? This new thing they are trying... at first I thought it was an obedience potion or something, then hypnotism and now... well I wonder what's going on. Maybe Snape's taking Harry somewhere in his mind, a memory of Sirius? GREAT new turn. Great chapter, greta story! :D I'm so glad you updated.
| Title: Chapter 15 - Malfoy Manor
| 22 Jun 2006 12:59 am
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| Reviewer: deb (Anonymous)
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what the heck??!! im confused now likes
| Title: Chapter 15 - Malfoy Manor
| 21 Jun 2006 11:58 pm
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| Reviewer: miracle (Anonymous)
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oh my gosh how can you be so crule PLEASE up date SOON cant wait to know how its going on you doing a great job, i love it!!!!
| Title: Chapter 15 - Malfoy Manor
| 21 Jun 2006 11:33 pm
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| Reviewer: dubdigit (Anonymous)
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I'm, completely confused? Need the next chapter to figure out where Harry is.
Squeeeeeeeeee!!! This is too awesome! I really enjoyed Harry's little meeting with Narcissa, and the aftermath of said meeting. Can't wait to see where this goes next!
| Title: Chapter 15 - Malfoy Manor
| 21 Jun 2006 10:33 pm
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| Reviewer: aslade (Anonymous)
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I can only say wonderful things of your story, I had missed your writting theses days, please update soon, i can`t wait to see what happens next.
| Title: Chapter 15 - Malfoy Manor
| 21 Jun 2006 8:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Angie (Anonymous)
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WOW!
This chapter was interesting.
Snape giving up thats shocking.
Umm... question.
At the end of this chapter sirius says " I had wondered where"
It stops like that i was wondering if it is supposed to be like that?
UPDATE SOON!
I love your story!
Angie
P.S.
I'm hope you had a good vacation.
Yay an update! I loved Narcissa Malfoy in this. She was just perfect, and what's Snape done to Harry? First I thought he was hypnotizing him, but I'm not sure now. Update soon, please! By the way, I dunno if you meant to do this, but Sirius's last line is cut off.
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