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Title: Chapter 16 - Cruel Reality 12 Jul 2006 8:31 pm
Reviewer: ANN (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Excellent chapter.  It captured Sirius perfectly.

Title: Chapter 16 - Cruel Reality 12 Jul 2006 7:08 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    As usually, GREAT chapter. Just one thing, I've read many Severitus when Snape is soo strict towards Harry, but when they get to know each other, he just melts and become all fluffy and nice and that's not Snape:P I think it's good that they are closer now, but please, I beg you, keep Snape IC! 
Title: Chapter 16 - Cruel Reality 12 Jul 2006 4:36 am
Reviewer: youngwrider (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Your story just keeps getting better and better.  You did an amazing job with this chapter.  I'm so glad these fellas got a chance to talk.  You made me cry when Harry was so upset about Sirius.  The scene was very well done, very sad, and very realistic.  I love Harry losing it and Snape's comforting him.  It was still very much in character. I know Snape is going to let him stay. Can't wait till your next update.  Good work! 
Title: Chapter 16 - Cruel Reality 11 Jul 2006 11:42 pm
Reviewer: dubdigit (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm so glad you updated. Your chapter was fantastic and I really hope that Snape lets him stay there.
Title: Chapter 16 - Cruel Reality 11 Jul 2006 10:12 pm
Reviewer: Spiorad (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is defenetly one of the best, if not the best chapter so far. Great job!

    ~Jan
Title: Chapter 16 - Cruel Reality 11 Jul 2006 9:59 pm
Reviewer: Amaruk Wolfheart (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Spectacularly awesome. I love this story to eensy-weensy itty-bitty teeny-tiny shreds amen.
Title: Chapter 16 - Cruel Reality 11 Jul 2006 9:04 pm
Reviewer: sweets2 (Signed) [Report This]

    Great chapter.  I think this is the tip of the iceberg.  Harry may be almost 16 but an emotionally unstable one at that with all that is going on.  I don't think Snape is done with him either yet. 

    I believe there will be moreof a punishment.  I can't wait to read more. Great chapter.

Title: Chapter 16 - Cruel Reality 11 Jul 2006 8:56 pm
Reviewer: AchillesMonkey (Anonymous) [Report This]
    How long will this story be? Because I have a bad feeling that it's going to be ending soon. Or maybe not. Summer's not over yet after all. Are you going to continue into the school year?
Title: Chapter 16 - Cruel Reality 11 Jul 2006 8:39 pm
Reviewer: JadedColonel (Anonymous) [Report This]

    That was rather nice of Snape. But poor Harry.

    Update soon. Very curious as to how this story will end.

     

Title: Chapter 16 - Cruel Reality 11 Jul 2006 8:27 pm
Reviewer: Emilia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Okay, the chapter is short but I liked it very much.The way Harry found himself unsatisfied with the fantasy!Sirius. I think it is great that Harry realizes how well Snape takes care of him and how he wants to stay. But your cliffhanger is mean *pouts*. Keep up the good work!

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