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Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 01 May 2008 10:54 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    So exciting! Stop fidgeting! LOL
Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 29 Sep 2006 6:02 am
Reviewer: azamystic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    if you don't update...i'll cry. i swear to God. I'll cry. Please! please please please please please update. please! it's been sooooooo long. I can't wait anymore. please! with a cherry. or a strawberry, if you don't like cherries. or...or...anything you want really. just...just update ok? please?

    Author's Response: All right, I'm writing Chapter 20 tonight. Just had to see the season premiere of Supernatural first. It'll be up as soon as I can finish it. 
Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 29 Sep 2006 12:52 am
Reviewer: Abby Jack (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Brilliant! I just found this story recced over at fiction alley park, and I'm pleased that I went and had a look. This story is very in character. It is a refreshing change where Severus doesn't suddenly 'realise the error of his ways' or 'the light that was missing from his life' or some such other twist. A Time and Place to Grow is beautifully written keeping everyone in character. It is utterly perfect.

    *hugs*
    Abby Jack, bloody pirate.

Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 20 Sep 2006 10:05 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    >You have to update!!! I'm going crazy!
Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 15 Sep 2006 4:25 am
Reviewer: SAMANTHAKITTY (Anonymous) [Report This]

    THANK YOU SIR. MAY I HAVE ANOTHER? (CHATPER, THAT IS!)

Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 12 Sep 2006 7:09 pm
Reviewer: Catti666 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh boy... Harry's birthday won't be too wild! YOur Snape such a mix Severus and Snape in my behaving scale for Snape.  Snape means evil git and Severus is understanding professor/guardian.  You have middle of these both conclusion. I have one question for you... in your fic Harry is not used for corporal punishments and as normal kid... do you think Dursleys never gave corporal punishments for Harry? He still don't want to get back there in your fic so he certainly didn't enjoy his time there... I'd just imagine Harry would be used for corporal punishments at Dursley household. However, please update soon!
Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 11 Sep 2006 10:27 am
Reviewer: Silver Americana (Anonymous) [Report This]
    While I normally enjoy stories that realistically put Harry and Snape in situations where they must cohabit in relative peace, I find myself actually feeling empathic fury for Harry over Snape's treatment of him in this story.  There are probably reasons for why Snape does what he does, and its just that I never had to raise a child, but as a fiercely independent person myself, I can only find myself actively hating your version of Snape.  With Harry, I've always found him to be an interesting mix of adult and child, where he is starved for attention and rather immature at some things, but already capable of handling many things that a child cannot. In otherwords, he's a teenager.  I don't think Harry is really as bad off as you've made him. He may not always make the best decisions and actions, but again, he's a teenager, he's SUPPOSED to get things wrong and figure out for himself how to do things right.  That's what growing up is about, not being brought back to a 5 year old that is completely dependent on "Daddy."  Although, it is a fanfiction, and your story, but even that, I simply don't think I can read any more about how Harry is demeaned and contolled like he is completely incapable of taking care of himself.  For the people out there who learned to do for themselves long before the adults thought we could, this story in nearly insulting.


    Author's Response:

    I'm sorry this fanfiction did not sit well with you. It is my first, and sometimes I fear I take things to extreme. I try to put in a little bit of something for everyone, but it is impossible to please everyone. I will consider your suggestions as I continue to write. I hope you will continue to read and review, but if not, there are plenty other good stories here to suit all tastes.

    Thanks you for reviewing.

    Perry

Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 09 Sep 2006 11:55 pm
Reviewer: breannatala (Signed) [Report This]
    Hehe Great! Can't wait for more.
Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 09 Sep 2006 11:00 pm
Reviewer: lily (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Omg.... a cliffhanger!!

    Update asap!!!!

Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 05 Sep 2006 9:18 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I wonder how the party is going to end, disaster or brilliant? And who's the first guest, maybe it's Draco coming at a very unappropriate time?

    Great chapter!


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