Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 01 Sep 2006 6:06 pm
Reviewer: Elizabeth (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Aw, that's mean. It can't be a baddy, as the alarms didn't ring, but I can't wait to read a reaction of whoever enters first. Neville? Ron? Hermoine? Harry's best friend Seamus (dean must feel so left out now)... Or Dobby? Dobby with Winky, that'd be cool...

    Dobby with a huge box full of socks, none matching?

    Anyway, i love your story, and thought i should leave a message just for the sake of reviewing.

    I rate you a nine, since you are very close to perfection. Beyond the point of critisism, nearing the point of brilliance... almost there...

Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 01 Sep 2006 6:28 am
Reviewer: Mara727 (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I didn't recognize any glaring errors, just a few that are mispelled.  I also like seeing a bit of a carefree Harry. Not bad for a late nights work.

Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 01 Sep 2006 4:48 am
Reviewer: azamystic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was great. Nice Harry/Snape bonding. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 01 Sep 2006 4:04 am
Reviewer: Carolina (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I think it was great!! still with the spanking but I suppose it has a point.  Can't wait for the party... what if Snape invited other people? like MacGonagall? or The Dursleys!! haha... ok, maybe not. C

Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 01 Sep 2006 12:20 am
Reviewer: Amaruk Wolfheart (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love it love it love it. You always crack me up and write the characters very well. I can't wait to see how the party turns out!
Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 31 Aug 2006 8:24 pm
Reviewer: Visitor (Anonymous) [Report This]

    You're the best!  An update!  This was a marvelous chapter!  I knew Snape would punish Harry for what he did.  Poor Harry, always getting spanked, but I love it!

    Hope he had fun at his birthday, but knowing Harry, I'm sure something will go wrong.  I like how Harry and Snape's relationship is growing.

     Great job!

Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 31 Aug 2006 7:16 pm
Reviewer: thee_unknown_factor (Anonymous) [Report This]
    o that's awesome! I like your snape character a lot! can't wait for his birthday!!!
Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 31 Aug 2006 5:30 pm
Reviewer: sunsethill (Signed) [Report This]
    That was fun.  I think it was a good idea to point out that Harry is acting a little young for sixteen, but teenagers often do that.  One minute they're twenty, the next they're twelve.  And you continue to have a unique take on Harry and Snape's relationship. 
Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 31 Aug 2006 5:06 pm
Reviewer: Angie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thanks for the update! This chapter was very good. Keep up the good work! Update soon!
Title: Chapter 19 - Preparations 31 Aug 2006 4:55 pm
Reviewer: JadedColonel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Why did you stop?! Update as soon as possible.

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