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Title: Chapter 20 - A Different Birthday 26 Nov 2023 1:31 pm
Reviewer: Kashmiran (Signed) [Report This]

    OMG!!! I belive I was embarrassed for Harry when he got spanked in front of Neville. I felt as if I was standing there while he was getting spanked. 

     

    Harry should be in Hufflepuff as much as he cries. I thought he was going through a phase of grievance and everything was bottled up and needed to be released but c'mon Harry get a grip on yourself. 

Title: Chapter 20 - A Different Birthday 10 Aug 2011 8:45 am
Reviewer: The Indian Patriot (Signed) [Report This]
    i chckd the oxford american dictionary. it said dat candelabrum is sngular nd candelabra is plural. some use candelabra as singular nd candelabras as plural but it is utterly wrong. awesome story.
Title: Chapter 20 - A Different Birthday 10 Aug 2011 8:45 am
Reviewer: The Indian Patriot (Signed) [Report This]
    i chckd the oxford american dictionary. it said dat candelabrum is sngular nd candelabra is plural. some use candelabra as singular nd candelabras as plural but it is utterly wrong. awesome story.
Title: Chapter 20 - A Different Birthday 25 Mar 2011 6:10 pm
Reviewer: Always (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You know, Harry could become suicidal. Sorry if sounds dumb, but that would be a great way to go! Snape panics when he can't find Harry and Harry is about to throw himself off a tower or is about to bleed to death. Just an idea. Perhaps if Snape finds out that Harry has scars on his back from being beaten by his uncle, then maybe his veiw on spanking would change. Harry is depressed perhaps after a nightmare about Sirius, then Cedric, or something along those lines. He ends up feeling worthless. He tries to kill himself. Yet again, just an idea. Bye! (This was an awesome chapter. Keep it up!)
Title: Chapter 20 - A Different Birthday 02 May 2008 12:36 am
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, what a sweet ending
Title: Chapter 20 - A Different Birthday 21 Jan 2008 5:40 pm
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    "...you will never be able to save everyone. If you try, you’ll destroy yourself in the process."
    Wow. What perfect words of wisdom from Snape. I'm impressed.
Title: Chapter 20 - A Different Birthday 22 Oct 2006 7:49 pm
Reviewer: Marion (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Some very good points about Neville. I hate it when people say that Snape 'bullies' Neville: he treats Neville like a normal child and like any normal child he expects Neville to pay attention in class and not make a (potentially dangerous) mess of things. To suggest that Neville is somehow 'special' (read 'imbecilic and fragile to boot') would be a disservice to Neville. Neville had a confidence (towards adults, not towards his peers) problem before he ever came to Hogwarts. Neville will have to overcome that, and to pat him on the head and tell him he doesn't have to conform to the rest of standards of the classroom because we can't *possibly* expect *Neville* to achieve such a thing would not only be a gross injustice towards Neville, but would also be counter effective...

    So, applause for your handling of the 'Neville thing'.

    And I love the way Snape's approval or disaproval starts to matter to Harry more and more.

Title: Chapter 20 - A Different Birthday 22 Oct 2006 6:29 am
Reviewer: Jennifer (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I love this story!! I've been compulsively checking for updates everyday (OK, several times a day) since I finished reading it a few weeks ago. I can't wait to see what happens next. I also can't get enough of your Snape character, who I find brilliant. Screw grad school, write some more chapters of your story!!

    Your fans are anxiously waiting ;) Having Draco around should definitely be fun!!   

Title: Chapter 20 - A Different Birthday 03 Oct 2006 4:20 pm
Reviewer: veritas (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aww...that was such a good chapter. It's ok that it takes a while for updates, because they are always so good when they come. That paragraph about being a hero was perfect. I almost started crying. So the pocket watcch, is there something special about it? I hope you update soon!
Title: Chapter 20 - A Different Birthday 02 Oct 2006 8:46 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, and one more thing, will Harry and Draco become friends? Just wondering. Not too fond over the idea actually.

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