Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 20 - A Different Birthday 02 Oct 2006 8:39 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I loved the speech Snape gave to Harry and the birthday present. Maybe Harrys new teddy bear? Something he can hold or listen to when he's upset or anything.. Very cute. And the nerve of Harry to speak of Alice infront of Neville and Snape! He really deserved that spanking. Very fitting to give him sixteen spanks. And the threat about the hairbrush was great. Maybe Snape will spank Harry with it sometimes? The only thing I only have one question. How red is Harrys bottom after a spanking and how far is Snape pulling his underwear down?

    An excellent chapter!

Title: Chapter 20 - A Different Birthday 02 Oct 2006 12:58 pm
Reviewer: Carpe Savium (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Awww, I hope he keeps the pocket watch with him all the time! Snape gave such a good, down-to-earth talk, and Harry's jsut so cute when he tried to do the right think and messes up! Brilliant! 

Title: Chapter 20 - A Different Birthday 30 Sep 2006 11:10 pm
Reviewer: Amaruk Wolfheart (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yaaaay! Love it! ^_^ I think you did very well with the birthday party (such a Snapish thing to do) and the ending was so sweet. ^_^ I loved it!!!
Title: Chapter 20 - A Different Birthday 30 Sep 2006 9:37 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely, lovely, lovely! Poor Harry, I thought he was done for when Hermione started talkign about the polyjuice! And then he got spanked! Ah! I wonder if Neville is feeling bad now or if he's insightful and he'll get what Harry was trying to prove. i'm glad that Harry had a birthday and that it was a normal birthday and not spectacular. I loved how SNape gave him a pocket watch at the end. Lovely ending. Thanks so much for posting!
Title: Chapter 20 - A Different Birthday 30 Sep 2006 8:19 am
Reviewer: azamystic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm crying. God you're good. You're really good. I'm sitting here at my computer screen at quarter past one in the morning, crying. Thank you soooooo much. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Title: Chapter 20 - A Different Birthday 30 Sep 2006 6:38 am
Reviewer: youngwrider (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good chapter.  I loved Snape's speech, Harry's tears, and the watch. Too bad Harry got a spanking on his birthday, but at least Snape's heart was in the right place.  

Disclaimer Charm: Harry Potter and all related works including movie stills belong to J.K. Rowling, Scholastic, Warner Bros, and Bloomsbury. Used without permission. No copyright infringement is intended. No money is being made off of this site. All fanfiction and fanart are the property of the individual writers and artists represented on this site and do not represent the views and opinions of the Webmistress.

Powered by eFiction 3.5