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Title: Chapter 21 - Enter Draco 24 Oct 2006 10:10 pm
Reviewer: SiriuslyMental (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, you've got to update this soon! I love the characterisation in this, and the plot is wonderful. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

    Regards,
    SiriuslyMental
Title: Chapter 21 - Enter Draco 24 Oct 2006 9:19 pm
Reviewer: Tracy (Anonymous) [Report This]

    The whole forced study while Snape enjoys a quiet evening was great!  The whole thank you note scene was SO true to life.  I think I may have been identifying with Harry a little too well.  I wonder what that says about me?  LOL!

    Harry was certainly being a brat, but then again, he does truly hate Draco and he is a teenager full of volitile feelings.  Draco was well written (as are all the characters) and I could clearly see him saying and doing exactly what he did.

    Snape is certainly optimistic about finding the same number of living guests in his home in the morning if he puts those boys in the same room together the night before. 

    Looking forward to the next chapter!  I can't help but wonder if Draco is going to land himself over his Godfather's knee!  Now there is a boy in need of a spanking!

    Tracy 

Title: Chapter 21 - Enter Draco 24 Oct 2006 5:59 pm
Reviewer: Athenea (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent! I look forward to some Harry and Draco interaction. I have a feeling it will be a long week for the both of them. Maybe Harry will bring out his Slytherin side to get even with him?
Title: Chapter 21 - Enter Draco 24 Oct 2006 2:42 pm
Reviewer: AchillesMonkey (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I knew that was going to end badly. I just knew it! But great chapter. The next one will be fun, I'm sure. Update soon please.

Title: Chapter 21 - Enter Draco 24 Oct 2006 11:31 am
Reviewer: Marion (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Ooohh, what a nasty piece of work Harry is! So much like his father :-)

    Of course, it's rather 'asking' for it if you put these two together in a room, let alone letting them share one, but on the other hand it shows that Snape is having *no* shenanigans. He simply expects them to behave, no matter what. By not tiptoeing around the issue or trying to separate them physically, Snape - very wisely, as a parental figure - puts the responsibility of their behaviour in *their* court.

Title: Chapter 21 - Enter Draco 24 Oct 2006 9:58 am
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Thanks for the update! I wonder if Harry will ever learn. Plotting against Draco against Snape's wishes. I thought he had finally learned.

    I was surprised that Snape didn't spank them instantly after the continued fighting. If they go on like this I have a feeling neither of the two be sitting down comfortable. I hope Snape does not treat Draco better than Harry, because he is his godson. But Snape seems just, so I hope he will stay that way, especially as it seems that Harry and Draco are more fighting for a place with him and for his affection. It seems it is not only the hate for êach other from the last 5 years but also something like sibling rivalery that keeps same fighting. I can't wait for more! Please update soon.


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