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Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 10 Aug 2011 9:06 am
Reviewer: The Indian Patriot (Signed) [Report This]
    um.. i think it is optical illusion not optical allusions
Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 22 Dec 2006 4:25 pm
Reviewer: Tracy (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Perry,

    I checked only to find that you'd updated and posted not one but several chapters since I last looked!  Which is cool cause then I don't have the torture of having to wait, but I feel guilty for not posting fb sooner!

    I just love Harry's whole approach of being happy and agreeable in contrast to what a little turd Draco is being in order to annoy Draco.  That was priceless.  Of course it was only so long before Malfoy would do something to annoy Harry too much for him to continue that.  I have to say, I feel for Snape!  I can imagine he wants to knock their heads togehter!  The man has far more patience than one would initially give him credit for. 

    I can't help but feel sorry for Draco.  Despite the fact that he is a whiney little snot, he has suffered abuse and that is always heartbreaking.  Add to that his current situation in life because of his father, our boy is in pretty sad shape.  These aren't things that will likely make him any more agreeable in nature.

    The door thing was brilliantly written!  I think I literally said, "Oh no!" out loud when I read it.  Poor Harry!  Fortunately I didn't have to suffer by waiting to read the next chapter to find out what happened!   

    Love your stuff girl!

    Tracy

     

Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 22 Nov 2006 4:46 am
Reviewer: SAMANTHAKITTY (Signed) [Report This]
    HOW MUCH LONGER TIL THE NEXT CHAPTER?!? CAN'T WAIT! OH PLEASE, OH PLEASE, OH PLEASE!
Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 16 Nov 2006 3:01 am
Reviewer: Karen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow!  I am soooo impressed.  I was hooked after chapter 1.  So, don't make me wait forever for an update please.  I love this.  Thanks
Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 15 Nov 2006 10:57 pm
Reviewer: Angie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Good chapter!! Love the intereaction between Harry and Draco. Interesting to see the differences between Harr and Draco when Snape is with or speaking to the. This is getting interestin so I hope you update soon!
Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 14 Nov 2006 7:33 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    good chapter but I think that Sev is being a git towards Harry it's not like he meant to slam the door on Draco's fingers.  i do believe they both deserve to be punished for being brats but i don't think Harry deserves all of Sev's wrath.  Please update soon. 
Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 14 Nov 2006 3:45 pm
Reviewer: Athenea (Signed) [Report This]

    Great Chapter!

Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 13 Nov 2006 1:17 am
Reviewer: Mrs_Morbid_Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think I now what's goingto happen to Harry! I think this is one of the best stories I have ever read. Update soon.
Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 11 Nov 2006 12:12 pm
Reviewer: veritas (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Not another sort of cliffhanger moment!!! Ah well. We'll just have to wait for the next chapter. Great job yet again!
Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 10 Nov 2006 7:52 am
Reviewer: cobel (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I had really hoped after Malfoy arrived that we would see that Snape had truly changed and grown but it is obvious that he is still the same unfair son of a b**ch that he has always been. It would have been intersting to see if Malfoy had wanted his bed if he had given it up for his oh so precious guest.


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