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Reviews For A Time and Place to Grow
Harry needs to grow also, he acts like 10 instead of 16. It's rather sad to see him putting up with so much injustice without showing any backbone just because he wants a father figure. He's become a rather pathetic character - it's painful reading him this way.
Another cliffhanger... Will Draco and Harry ever get along, they don't seem to be anywhere near each other? And what is Severus going to do to Harry, he was really mad at the end of the chapter... Well as usual i love your writing, it's one of my favorites... Update ASAP!!!
"He wasn’t going to let Draco get his chair or the teacup with the yellow rim and red handle because that was his. Harry might have to share a bedroom and Snape, but Draco wasn’t getting the teacup!" Lol! I've just reread it'cause I know I missed things in the first reading, like that line. I still don't think Harry deserves a spanking. And I think Draco deserves to get punished some too. Like when Harry notes that if he had done anything like that, he would have been sent to the corner. Snape needs to treat them both the same or at least explain why he's treating them differently. Could we get a chapter or something in Snape's POV? Maybe Snape's POV while he's spanking Harry? We've always had Harry's POV during the spanking scenes, it would be interesting to see Snape's. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Update SOON!!!!!!
Poor Harry, Snape thought that he did it on purpose! What if Harry gets spanked now? I think that it's a bit unfair that Snape treats Harry like dirt and pompers Draco, but after all, Draco is their guest! Anyway, Snape sould be little more "careful". You must update soon! It was an amazing chapter!
I don't think this was 100% Harry's fault. In his mind he knew the hand would have moved. Harry is experiencing jealousy but like a big brother would a new arrival almost. Except Harry and Draco hate each other. All Draco would need is to see Harry have a nightmare. Update again soon. |
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