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Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 10 Nov 2006 7:42 am
Reviewer: Rona (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Harry needs to grow also, he acts like 10 instead of 16. It's rather sad to see him putting up with so much injustice without showing any backbone just because he wants a father figure. He's become a rather pathetic character - it's painful reading him this way.

     

Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 10 Nov 2006 7:24 am
Reviewer: lilyseverus (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Another cliffhanger...

    Will Draco and Harry ever get along, they don't seem to be anywhere near each other? And what is Severus going to do to Harry, he was really mad at the end of the chapter...

     Well as usual i love your writing, it's one of my favorites...

    Update ASAP!!!

     

     

Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 10 Nov 2006 12:16 am
Reviewer: AchillesMonkey (Anonymous) [Report This]

    "He wasn’t going to let Draco get his chair or the teacup with the yellow rim and red handle because that was his. Harry might have to share a bedroom and Snape, but Draco wasn’t getting the teacup!"

    Lol! I've just reread it'cause I know I missed things in the first reading, like that line. I still don't think Harry deserves a spanking. And I think Draco deserves to get punished some too. Like when Harry notes that if he had done anything like that, he would have been sent to the corner. Snape needs to treat them both the same or at least explain why he's treating them differently. Could we get a chapter or something in Snape's POV? Maybe Snape's POV while he's spanking Harry? We've always had Harry's POV during the spanking scenes, it would be interesting to see Snape's. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 09 Nov 2006 11:06 pm
Reviewer: JJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    SO cruel to leave us there! I have to disagree with some of the reviewers though- Harry may not have meant to really hurt Draco, but it wasn't a complete accident. He was behaving irresponsibly when he slammed the door and Snape deserves to be mad!! He's already put up with a bunch of crap from the both of them :)
    Update SOON!!!!!!
Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 09 Nov 2006 9:44 pm
Reviewer: nemo (Anonymous) [Report This]
    this is really good, can i make a suggestion that whatever snape does to harry, Harry accepts without running or verbally complaining in order to acknowledge the fact that he feels he went to far, and feels really guilty.  Have him take responsibility for his own actions and talk and explain rationally why he was in such a stop...
Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 09 Nov 2006 4:25 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Poor Harry, Snape thought that he did it on purpose! What if Harry gets spanked now? I think that it's a bit unfair that Snape treats Harry like dirt and pompers Draco, but after all, Draco is their guest! Anyway, Snape sould be little more "careful".

    You must update soon! It was an amazing chapter!

Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 09 Nov 2006 6:18 am
Reviewer: SiriuslyMental (Signed) [Report This]
    How could you just leave it at this? We've got to know what happens next! This story is really brilliant, and I love, love, love your characterisations of everything. Very cleverly done.
Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 09 Nov 2006 6:10 am
Reviewer: azamystic (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You know, I really had expected Snape to be fair. He really isn't being, is he? Well, I checked to see if you had updated, and was surprised to see one today. I liked this chapter, eagerly awaiting the next one.
Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 09 Nov 2006 6:05 am
Reviewer: youngwrider (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry.  I'm surprised he didn't get it when he licked the jam pot. He and Draco are so imature; it's really funny.  I feel a bit sorry for him being so jealous.  I'm looking forward to Snape's reaction.  Did Draco get spanked? Is that why he was pouting?  It was pretty cute the way Snape tucked Harry in.  You would think Draco might be a bit jealous as well.  I can't wait for more.  Keep up the great writing.
Title: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake 09 Nov 2006 2:19 am
Reviewer: sweets2 (Signed) [Report This]

    I don't think this was 100% Harry's fault. In his mind he knew the hand would have moved.  Harry is experiencing jealousy but like a big brother would a new arrival almost.  Except Harry and Draco hate each other.

    All Draco would need is to see Harry have a nightmare.

    Update again soon.


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