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Reviews For A Time and Place to Grow
Great chapter, i loved the interactions and how Snape seemed so baffled about Harry's concern over Draco getting more attention than him! Please update soon as you can!
Fantastic. I had several favourite lines but here's just one of them: Snape was neither a woman nor soft-hearted, and he said, "No more slamming doors." Great. I loved how Snape talked through everything with Harry. The silver ground snitch was a great idea - I wonder if Harry and Draco will compete with each other over it. I really liked how Snape told Draco that the yellow cup was Harry's and to take another one. I found Draco to be very in character this chapter. Opening the subject of abuse from Harry to Draco was unexpected but I think it was needed. It added a touch of realism and I hope that maybe Draco will study, or notice the way Snape and Harry act around each other. Poor Harry, Draco heard them... he doesn't seem to be too mortified though, he was able to fake it and threaten Malfoy back. :) Great chapter, thanks for writing and posting! About what another reviewr said: I don't know, I'm a lot older than 16 and I still feel special over cookies and what-not. :)
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"And I've seen him hit you with his cane once or twice just because you said something he didn't quite like." Silence from the other bed. Harry glanced over there. Draco was still sitting up, but his lips were pressed together so hard they were almost white. "Does he hit you?" Harry asked bluntly. Still no answer. Draco was staring ahead, his eyes wide and intense. Harry propped himself up on one elbow to better see the blond-haired boy. "Does he hit you? Does he beat you? With his cane?" Draco looked at Harry, and Harry drew in a sharp breath. "Draco," Harry searched for words to fit the horror of the moment, "Draco . . . no. Just . . . no." I can't imagine anything more awful. Poor Draco. The way you portrayed that scene was very good, thanks for handeling it that way. Now I'm not sure whether Snape should spank him or not, but I guess if you made the difference clear, it would be ok. Thanks for posting, I loved this chapter!
Awesome Chapter! I really liked how you had Snape talk to Harry and how they worked things out. Seems like Snape is actually trying to be fair! Imagine that! Still waiting for him to smack Draco, but hey, that's me! I hope Harry and Draco can get along somewhat! More soon!
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