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Title: Chapter 24 - Welcoming Darkness 02 May 2008 3:29 am
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Holy Crud!
Title: Chapter 24 - Welcoming Darkness 06 Jan 2007 9:26 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    Oh my gosh! LOL! Fantastic: "And the first thing he saw was the silver toothbrush floating in the toilet." Tehehe. This freaking rocks. "They had all been so peaceful and happy, going about the summer and doing their own thing, and then the drama queen arrived." Yeah, Potter you're one to talk. You're the one that blew up the lab- gah. Peaceful, indeed. :)

    Di you mean to use pice here, or prince? "...but in a manor with a grouchy potions master and an obnoxious little price."

    I LOVED this part: “If you have something to say, then say it!” Draco snapped. “All right,” Harry stood up, realizing that he wasn’t going to get a moment’s peace until he said something, “you should try this book. It’s a pretty good read.” Muah ha ha!!! Best line ever. Good job Harry! You're getting a backbone of the right sort. I was a little surprised about what Draco said. It seemed like he was doing a good job hurting Harry with his words, giving as good as he (didn't) get, but Harry was able to just ignore him. I feel proud of Harry, but I'm also surprised. Could Snape be influencing him this much for the good?

    I have to agree with Snape, Draco should be kicked out. I wonder if the potions messed with Harry's brain, or maybe his reasoning skills. Or maybe this is the person he's turning into? In any case, it will be interesting to see the two boys interacting some more.

    If you ever need to post a chapter, just copy it and paste it in the box normally with a Ctrl+V. It should turn out alright. If it looks a little off and has too many spaces, or doesn't have indentations, that's okay. I wander around the latest chapters and edit them if they need to be, so it's no pressure on you. :) Just paste and as long as it's readble, don't worry about it.

    Harry heard he leave five minutes later, tossing the book on the table as he went. him.

    Deeep down, (Deep)

    ...and I told him that at least you wanted me o stay. (to)

    And then we’d all by happy her together. (here)

    probably living in cave (caves)

Title: Chapter 24 - Welcoming Darkness 04 Jan 2007 9:58 am
Reviewer: Cecilia (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Please, pdantzler, please update! I can't wait anymore!



    Author's Response: All right, I am working on it, but it won't be until late tonight or tomorrow. Other stuff got in the way over the holidays, but once grad school starts again, I should get into my old two weeks posting schedule. And for the rest of you, please note that I have pretty much kept to the two weeks posting.

    Thanks a ton!
Title: Chapter 24 - Welcoming Darkness 01 Jan 2007 8:33 am
Reviewer: Arica, Princess of Rivendell (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please update again soon
Title: Chapter 24 - Welcoming Darkness 29 Dec 2006 1:34 am
Reviewer: Alli (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I just read the whole story up to this chapter and noooo, you just had to leave us there.  This story is so well written and I can't wait to see what happens.  

     Keep up the writing and update soon :D

Title: Chapter 24 - Welcoming Darkness 22 Dec 2006 4:46 pm
Reviewer: Tracy (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Perry,

    Oh no!  I don't have the next chapter to read to see what happens next!  OMIGOD, that means I'll have to...to....to...wait!  Ugh!  Somebody quick, buy me some patience cause I'm running a little low!  LOL!

    Harry is so determined to behave better and not give into the temptation to get into it with Draco.  However, he does say something that deeply hurts and offends Malfoy.  I think Draco probably cannot abide the idea of anybody feeling sorry for him and we get to see just what an evil little shit he can be when he wants revenge.  I want to believe Draco didn't honestly mean for Harry to die and didn't completely understand the gravity of what he did.  I really hope that is the case because Harry has made excuses for him.  I can only imagine what Snape must be feeling right now!

    More soon plz!

    Tracy 

Title: Chapter 24 - Welcoming Darkness 22 Dec 2006 6:01 am
Reviewer: Ebbtide Chequ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    LOVE it!!! =)
Title: Chapter 24 - Welcoming Darkness 19 Dec 2006 5:55 am
Reviewer: lilyseverus (Anonymous) [Report This]

    A good chapter... but a cliffhanger!!!!

    Update soon!!!

Title: Chapter 24 - Welcoming Darkness 19 Dec 2006 4:08 am
Reviewer: SnapeFan35 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Malfoy is SO getting a spanking!
Title: Chapter 24 - Welcoming Darkness 19 Dec 2006 3:04 am
Reviewer: ATPTG Reader (Anonymous) [Report This]

    No...just...no. You did not leave the chapter off there. No freakin' way you left the chapter off there. You're going to be the death of me and many others by making us wait for this evil cliff hanger.

    Amazing chapter. I mean that. I loved the whole thing!

    I know you get this a lot, but please update as soon as possible. Heh. Sorry we're so annoying begging for updates, but we all just have to know what is going to happen next.

    But also do enjoy the holidays. Don't let fanfiction get in the way of that!

    Thanks for the great story!

     


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