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Title: Chapter 24 - Welcoming Darkness 17 Dec 2006 8:49 pm
Reviewer: youngwriders (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Hey,

    My review didn't post for some reason. I just wanted to put my two siclkles in and say how much I enjoyed the chapter. Loved the the way Harry stood up to Draco.  And then standing up for him was really a surprise.  I wanted to put in my vote for a spanking for Draco similar to the one Harry got for lying Not sure I'd like Harry to witness or hear it though.  I think he should be the bigger man.  Anywho... Thanks for updating.  I really like your fic.

Title: Chapter 24 - Welcoming Darkness 17 Dec 2006 12:32 pm
Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Tis story is getting better with each chapter. I just love it! It seems Harry is growing up. It is nice to see Snape interacting a bit more with Harry and explaining things instead of just ordering him around. I hope Draco gets spanked, he deserves it. I was a bit surprised that Harry defended Draco's actions. I hope they don't become friends at least not anytime soon.

     

    Please update! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Title: Chapter 24 - Welcoming Darkness 17 Dec 2006 9:23 am
Reviewer: veritas (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Wow...well first of all I was really surprised at how much Harry stood up for Draco, but then again he always has had a ton of compassion for others, even his enemies. I definitely cannot wait for another chapter. This is honestly the story that I most frequently check for updates. I can't wait to see what happens next! Amazing job as usual!

Title: Chapter 24 - Welcoming Darkness 16 Dec 2006 10:39 pm
Reviewer: sweets2 (Signed) [Report This]

    LOL,

    That was hysterical. I can't believe that Harry is acting so nonchelantly. I bet when he is in his right mind again he will be doing some ranting about almost dying. I'm surprised Sirius didn't get added into the mix. Since he is gone as well. I don't think that Harry and Draco will become friends. It's too unlikely.

    Great job. Please update again soon.

Title: Chapter 24 - Welcoming Darkness 16 Dec 2006 8:11 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    Oh don't worry! I think you did use the Word clipboard button becasue you had (br /) tags and not (p) tags. :) That is what the Word button does. I went and converted all the (br /)'s to (p)'s so your story is all fixed now. The reason why you couldn't indent your story is because it was using (br /) tags for spacing. (br)'s can't have styles assigned to them, but (p)'s can.

Title: Chapter 24 - Welcoming Darkness 16 Dec 2006 6:35 pm
Reviewer: Kateri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    WOW!  That was a great chapter, I'm so tired of perfect!Draco in so many stories, never doing anything wrong when forced into close quarters with Harry, lets face it in the books he had no problem hurting anyone.  Eager for more
Title: Chapter 24 - Welcoming Darkness 16 Dec 2006 6:26 pm
Reviewer: starangel2106 (Signed) [Report This]
    oh my! that was great.  really thrilling(uh sp?).  and the ending. love!  weee. thank you!
Title: Chapter 24 - Welcoming Darkness 16 Dec 2006 5:33 pm
Reviewer: Cecilia (Anonymous) [Report This]

    That little nerv of the brat.. Grr, spank on Snape! Nice to see Snape fuss over Harry and hopfully (I demand it)Draco will get a spanking and Harry will be there to watch or at least listen!

    Great chapter and update soon!

Title: Chapter 24 - Welcoming Darkness 16 Dec 2006 4:19 pm
Reviewer: dana (Anonymous) [Report This]
    great story! keep those cool chapters coming!!

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