i chckd the oxford american dictionary. it said dat candelabrum is sngular nd candelabra is plural. some use candelabra as singular nd candelabras as plural but it is utterly wrong. awesome story.
i chckd the oxford american dictionary. it said dat candelabrum is sngular nd candelabra is plural. some use candelabra as singular nd candelabras as plural but it is utterly wrong. awesome story.
Oh yea! I wanted to add one more thing!
The Immobulus thing! That seemed a little...cruel. I mean it wasn't cruel to Immobulus him in the first place, a little impatient maybe, but not cruel. But leaving him Immobulized while you're at a Death Eater is mean. Poor Harry.
I have these little seisures at night that force me to stay Immobulized from anywhere from a minute all the way up until my body slips into a sleep after being exhausted, much like the Immobulus you have in this story.
I guess for most ppl it's cool but for me i'm like *biting nails* *cringe* *cringe* oh noooo! loool Cuz I hate having those seizures. Like especially when houses around my house were being ransacked, I was so scared someone would try to rob our house while I was in the middle of a seizure not able to move anything or talk, but could hear everything.
so yea lol, it seemed cruel in my opinion, but as you see, my opinion is a bit strong because I understand how it feels, but for most ppl it's prob nothing. Especially because most people can't get through Sev's wards around the house and Sev would prob risk his life before letting anyone touch Harry.
Just me being overly analytical again!
I like this chapter a lot because it seems like this is the point where Sev starts turning more fatherly and all git of the dungeon-ish. I also like that Harry realizes that already he has some sort of affection for Sev and he feels safe with Sev. I still can't believe he was dumb enough to go in the potion's store. I mean seriously! Sev is a POTIONS MASTER, not some common guardian! The man LIVES for potions, and you go into his potion's store! smh...well, I guess he learned.
Hehehe, that's why I love the sequel to this when Harry is like "His potions store Hermione! It was his potions store!" looool
love this chapter, just love how their relationship is starting to mold. I think Harry's so called "punishment" with Sev for 3 days is really helping them. WEEEEEE!!!! On to the next!
I'm so weird...
Hi pdantzler. I'm reading your story through again and figured i'd just do some random reviews on the chapters. I think I only did one review last time. Normally if I review a fic, I review at least 3 times lol.
I liked this chapter and the "I'm on fire!" thing. I also liked how Harry protested that he shouldn't be punished because he was only rude while being on fire lol. I completely agree with that mannn! hahaha
The one thing that bothers me now (though it didn't seem to bother me the first time or two i've read this chapter......weird, I think i'm just becoming more emotional...lol) is the way Snape acts. Like omg it bothers me so much. He says that Harry has spent his Summers lounging about, not doing anything. When in reality all his holiday was spent cleaning, not being fed and being miserable. I feel so bad for Harry! And since i've read the story, I know things aren't going to change too quickly... : (
But, like I said, this didn't bother me too much the first time or two i've read this, especially with it turning out so well and everything, I think i'm overly emotional right now.
You're an epic writer and whenever I mention my fav. fan fics to people I always include this one along with the sequel and two or three other fanfics. You make me remember you! god I hope that didn't sound creepy....lol
this ws an AMAZING story i loved reading it!!! honestly it ws so gr8 that i read it all in one sitting i really really love hw snape said i love you at the end he hadnt really mentioned anything like that b4 so it mde it all the more suprising n sweet i cant w8 to read the sequel i can honestly say that i enjoyed reading this story very very much u shld b published no doubt abt it nyways now im gushing so i'll just say this once again: I LOVE THIS STORY!!
kk im done now :D tke care and write more!!!
| Title: Chapter 20 - A Different Birthday
| 25 Mar 2011 6:10 pm
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| Reviewer: Always (Anonymous)
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You know, Harry could become suicidal. Sorry if sounds dumb, but that would be a great way to go! Snape panics when he can't find Harry and Harry is about to throw himself off a tower or is about to bleed to death. Just an idea. Perhaps if Snape finds out that Harry has scars on his back from being beaten by his uncle, then maybe his veiw on spanking would change. Harry is depressed perhaps after a nightmare about Sirius, then Cedric, or something along those lines. He ends up feeling worthless. He tries to kill himself. Yet again, just an idea. Bye! (This was an awesome chapter. Keep it up!)
| Title: Chapter 25 - Red Gloves, Bright Light
| 25 Feb 2011 10:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Anonymous)
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Awwwww Snape really is just a teddy bear! I'm glad that Draco was punished, so that way he wouldn't run back to school and embarrass Harry!
| Title: Chapter 2 - A Bath and Breakfast
| 13 Feb 2011 9:29 am
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| Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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I think Snape and Harry both are a little too out of canon here, but I like the idea of Harry searching for the necklaces so I'll continue on.
OMG I love this story. I think it's the third or fourth time I've read it. Now on to the next!!
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