| Title: Chapter 29 - End of a Journey
| 25 Aug 2008 6:06 pm
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| Reviewer: Kohee (Anonymous)
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This was perhaps the best HP fanfic i have ever read and I have read a lot. I'm tempted to go back to the beginning and start over again, but first the second installment. Which you must be sure to update. Oh this was great! Loved it. Thank you, thank you, thank you for sharing it. Your characters, their interactions, and over all pace of the story was to say the least brilliant. Having read this all in one sitting my mouth hurts from laughing so much. Not only that but I choked on my coffee twice. Ok, I will force myself to stop now. Oh hell, thank you again for this amazing story. You made my day and for all of us readers in need of a good read (hehe) NEVER stop writing. It would be too big of a loss.
WOW! AMAZING! I have completely and totally loved this story! You fleshed out Snape into such a great 3D character, even the Manor itself felt like a well defined character! I can't wait to see how Draco and Harry handle things when they're back at school! And Harry is really starting to mature into a great young man! I can't wait to see how classes go and everything else! yay!
Small error in the 10th paragraph from bottom, 4th sentence. I believe the word you wanted was "fantasized" (root word "fantasy"), not "fanaticized" (root word "fanatic").
Aha! A fellow Alan Rickman lover! I enjoyed "if you were a Muggle, you could be on the stage with that kind of acting. Live in London, have adoring fans, always play the villain."
Aren't there some ADHD drugs in the wizarding world they could give Harry for his abysmal impulse control?
Best chapter so far! Maybe even the best chapter of all. (But in fairness, I don't know what's coming yet.)
I love a good, well-written angsty chapter! Thank you.
Jeez, Harry's a dolt sometimes. Hope he does some growing up soon. I believe we're starting to get as bored with this behavior of his as Snape is.
"Whatever someone says while on fire shouldn't count"--brilliant! And funny!
But later, when Severus is musing about his projected schedule for Harry, it should be "chomping" at the bit, rather than "chopping". "Chomping at the bit" is a phrase referring to an impatient horse, moving its mouth around the bit (the metal crosspiece attached to its bridle/reins) in its mouth.
I really like your imaginative story telling!
What a funny--and even in its own way, loving--bath! That was delightful!
| Title: Chapter 29 - End of a Journey
| 28 May 2008 7:03 am
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| Reviewer: Kelly (Anonymous)
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Aww
that was real great, i've been reading this story for the past two days, and i was way to engrossed to leave you a review, great work, I loved how you portrayed snape though I think at times Harry was out of character. But i liked it, it was subtle, although at times, like when harry litterally acted like a five year old, or just didnt think like himself (when he took a great deal of pleasure at Draco's pain) or said things like he goofed off during his first few years at Hogwarts, I just don't think that's quite accurate, but in any case I loved ur portrayal of snape, and how he acted toward Harry, perfect. the scene with sirius really upset me, but i think it was true and that was a reason JKR had to kill him off, Harry couldn't possibly live with him happily. He lost his own childhood in Azkaban he wouldn't know how to raise Harry
Anyways great work!
Really, brillant actually :)
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