| Title: Chapter 27 - Purple Paint
| 25 Oct 2007 7:51 pm
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| Reviewer: paheli (Anonymous)
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The boys are so cute in this chapter! And Snape is becoming a softie!
| Title: Chapter 16 - Cruel Reality
| 25 Oct 2007 7:40 pm
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| Reviewer: paheli (Anonymous)
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Awww, Harry's so cute! This story really makes you remember that he was just a kid, although he had all those responsibilities. I am proud of Snape for comforting Harry like he did. He really did make him feel better.
| Title: Chapter 29 - End of a Journey
| 12 Oct 2007 2:39 am
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| Reviewer: Myrrdin (Anonymous)
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Absolutely lovely! I loved this so much. Made me want to both laugh and cry, then rage at both Snape and Harry for being thick heads. I look forward to reading any and all stories that you would right in this 'verse.
| Title: Chapter 23 - Two Boys
| 09 Oct 2007 9:24 pm
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| Reviewer: paheli (Anonymous)
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Being a softhearted woman I wanted to pummel Snape for spanking poor Harry! But again, Harry is so cute when he says he's sorry.
| Title: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying
| 09 Oct 2007 9:20 pm
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| Reviewer: paheli (Anonymous)
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Poor Harry I feel so sorry for him. He is just so cute when he's sad though.
Beuatiful story pdanzler, it diserves to go on to my favorites list, and all ten frogs. Now, I'm going to read the sequel, and when I'm done with that, I promise you the best reveiw you ever had and I ever typed. Cheers!
Please make a sequal! i love this story!
| Title: Chapter 7 - Discussion on Disobedience
| 05 Sep 2007 11:19 pm
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| Reviewer: ummmm (Anonymous)
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I'm not sure who is more the child...
Wow! This story took me four days to read... Well I do have two jobs... but... this story was an encredible ride!! I would love a sequil! PLEASE!!
| Title: Chapter 29 - End of a Journey
| 06 Aug 2007 6:23 am
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| Reviewer: LovelyLena (Anonymous)
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I really don't have much time, but I just read this story straight through for the second time, and I wanted to tell you that I really enjoyed it. You write pretty well, and the grammar isn't too bad (although you could clean it up a little). The characters don't really seem like canon characters, but I love them anyway, and your plot was good. Thanks for writing a great story and look forward to a long review from me soon. =)
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