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Reviews For Dumbledore's Men
Title: Dumbledore's Men 11 Jul 2007 3:34 am
Reviewer: Kezz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Absolutely fantastic! Everyone was so in character. And you anaylsed their situation so well.

    The dialogue was well done and the whole premise was deep. Good stuff here!
Title: Dumbledore's Men 22 Jul 2006 3:00 am
Reviewer: Morgan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh, gosh this is making me cry a river!!  Soooo goood.
Title: Dumbledore's Men 01 Mar 2006 7:35 am
Reviewer: pdantzler (Signed) [Report This]

    Well done - very moving. I wish it could have been longer. I love scenes that take place at night so when the morning comes the characters wonder if it all were a dream, a trick of the darkness.

    Please keep writing. I enjoy your style 

Title: Dumbledore's Men 27 Feb 2006 10:13 am
Reviewer: Suzu_Beaver (Signed) [Report This]

    Wow, Bil!  You're really good at description - it all felt a lot more real than words on a screen ought.  And the dialogue!  You have a great vocabulary.  My favourite line:  "...Snape snarled, face twisted into an ugly expression that almost looked like pain."  It was so primal, and passionate.

    I was a tad scared starting this story (thought there might a a sad ending where they end up killing each other, haha silly me) but the reconcilation was really nice.  They totally deserve it.

Title: Dumbledore's Men 27 Feb 2006 2:22 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely. Thanks so much for sharing! I think that this is one of the best scenerios we can hope for. I loved how Harry tried to help Snape and explained about love. I love how Harry didn't really know it himself but explained what the Weasley's did. I liked the way they said they could use each other's names but they kept failing back to the old names - that was more realistic. I'm glad I read it.

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