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Reviews For Dumbledore's Men
The dialogue was well done and the whole premise was deep. Good stuff here!
Well done - very moving. I wish it could have been longer. I love scenes that take place at night so when the morning comes the characters wonder if it all were a dream, a trick of the darkness. Please keep writing. I enjoy your style
Wow, Bil! You're really good at description - it all felt a lot more real than words on a screen ought. And the dialogue! You have a great vocabulary. My favourite line: "...Snape snarled, face twisted into an ugly expression that almost looked like pain." It was so primal, and passionate. I was a tad scared starting this story (thought there might a a sad ending where they end up killing each other, haha silly me) but the reconcilation was really nice. They totally deserve it.
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