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Reviews For Snape's Christmas
Title: Snape's Christmas 17 Feb 2024 8:26 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I wish Snape could’ve seen what Harry saw
Title: Snape's Christmas 16 Feb 2012 5:16 am
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    nice job
Title: Snape's Christmas 23 Dec 2011 5:19 am
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting
Title: Snape's Christmas 09 Jun 2011 6:46 pm
Reviewer: 1sunfun (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice.
    CCAP
Title: Snape's Christmas 19 Mar 2010 11:34 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmmmm, interesting. Mila
Title: Snape's Christmas 27 Jun 2008 9:28 am
Reviewer: GoLd (Signed) [Report This]
    Weird but poetic as this is my first time ever reading a dabble
Title: Snape's Christmas 20 Feb 2007 6:09 am
Reviewer: Lily Elizabeth Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    The lonely potions master...a side I've never seen portrayed. And you did it in a drabble! Wow! I think you should seriously consider making this into a story, at least a one-shot. I love seeing this side of Snape!
Title: Snape's Christmas 27 Feb 2006 5:23 am
Reviewer: Bil (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! I love this! It's like a piece of poetry, shadowing around the story and not going into details. The last line is brilliant, sort of a summing up of Snape, almost. I like the idea, and you wrote it beautifully.

    Author's Response: Thank you!  This was my first ever drabble, and my first piece of fanfiction (on the net, that is, instead of being put through a paper shredder).  I had no idea drabble writing was so difficult.  Thank you for the Challenge, and helping me explore my writing!
Title: Snape's Christmas 27 Feb 2006 1:55 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]

    Nice drabble. :) I liked Snape being "another shadow". I liked the allusion to events in the first book and I liked how you added <i>"Tracking is not impossible, no.</i>" Thanks for sharing!

    What does the mean? "I examine his presents three hours before the dawn. <i>Inside the warded circle, I wait for an explosion.</i>"



    Author's Response:

    I was trying to say that Snape was the one Dumbledore assigned to protect Potter, including making sure the gifts sent to him for Christmas aren't trapped with explosives or curses, or other nasties.

     Writing a drabble is a lot harder than I'd thought. :)  Getting across the point that Snape is the one assigned to protect Potter, and does so in the shadows while Dumbledore is the one who talks to Potter and pulls the strings of everyone, and all in 100 words (!) certainly took longer than I thought it would. 

     But thank you for enjoying this!  I think I'll fix it up a bit, tighten and clarify the wording a bit more...


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