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Reviews For So it Ends, then Begins

Title: So it begins	29 Mar 2010 8:53 pm
Reviewer: Fujoshi (Signed)	[Report This]

Awesome!!! =)

Title: So it begins	16 Oct 2009 8:38 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)	[Report This]

Funny ending. I'm sorry I didn't review much, but I prefer to get to the end of an already completed story before reviewing. It saves me valuable time when I'm on a library computer. Kudos for keeping them mostly IC without make Sev a complete and utter greasy git.

Title: So it begins	01 Nov 2007 3:26 pm
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Title: So it begins	02 Feb 2007 5:47 am
Reviewer: kyleigh (couldn't be bothered to sign in) (Anonymous)	[Report This]

I just wanted to review and tell you how much I enjoyed your story. I enjoyed your wit and humour immensely. Your plot line, characterisation and dialogue was unique, creative, imaginative and innovative. I never even thought of comparing Snape to a dementor... and you also managed to reveal that tidbit of information but kept Snape in a positive light in the point of view of the reader - successfully I might add. I really enjoyed this story and I can see clearly from your writing that you enjoyed writing this story. :) Kyleigh

Title: So it begins	26 Oct 2006 2:51 am
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Title: So it begins	25 Oct 2006 7:50 am
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Title: So it begins	30 May 2006 7:40 am
Reviewer: Timberlou22 (Anonymous)	[Report This]

Wow, that was a beautifuly written story. The characters were very truthful to their personalities, I loved it.

Title: So it begins	29 Mar 2006 8:05 am
Reviewer: lilsis (Anonymous)	[Report This]

Why did you change this from the original version. This one seems broken up. some of the facts are confusing if the other version hadn't been read. Two examples I can think of are Neville being sent to Pomphry for expierience in healing, and Harry freezing up after being told by Snape to think of Potions as breaking a curse.

In the original, there is a conversation between Harry and Neville about Nev. wanting to go into healing. Then there is Harry thinking about being a Curse breaker. In this version the background information isn't there.

Author's Response: Haven't gotten through the whole version yet, that's why. It's unfortunate but life caught up with me right in the middle so its scattered at the moment. I'm working feverishly in spare time to remedy it but its a Senior's life for me, last semster. Heh.