:) Great chapter. I am so happy that Snape and Draco were there to help Harry. Poor kid.

"I know of the Horcruxes, Harry," Snape stated bluntly. "I wish to help you find the rest to destroy Voldemort." AWESOME line. hehe, I loved it. Also, Snape replied hotly, disturbed by the extent of the injuries he’d found. You really conveyed that nicely there.

As for things that could be improved on, I think that you have a really nicely plotted story and that it moves along very well. However, I think that you have a couple of gaps or strange order of action, things that the characters do. It's not really that bad, I had to think deeply about what exactly it was that I was noticing, but it is detracting from your story a little. Usually hurt and comfort scenes are exploited to their fullest without going overboard. For those who love h/c (hurt/comfort) the other parts of the story can be choppy and they won't care as long as the h/c part is done well. The writing was not quite fluid in this chapter to carry the h/c part. It's nothing really important but maybe just having an awareness will help. :)

This made Harry pause;he