Great chapter. Poor Harry, wow. That was intense. You did a really good job with the memories. The smears of blood were particularly vivid. It was good that Snape told Harry that it wasn't his fault so vehemently that Harry started to have doubts that it was. I hope that Harry will be able to someday heal from this. Good job.
Author's Response: Wow, I thank you for reviewing each chapter as you went. I like it when people give me their thoughts on each particular chapter and I have encountered reviewers who will only review the last chapter even if there are many when they first stumble upon the story. So thank you for taking the time to give me your thoughts on each chapter.
Thank you for the honest, constructful review. I appreciate it. I just read the first six chapters (I have two more that I'm still tweaking and therefore have yet to be posted) and I am reworking the first ones a bit because I am unhappy with the flow.
Again, thank you for the reviews.