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Title: Goodbye Sirius 02 May 2009 2:46 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, this story is really interesting. I'm really enjoying it. How could you abandon it?
Title: Goodbye Sirius 12 Sep 2008 1:15 pm
Reviewer: Yunacaycaythesecond (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, first I have to say... you got this from A Great and Terrible Beauty right? You know if the name and the way the story is going isn't a clue I don't know what is XD lol. But very good, I'm interested to see how this goes.
Title: Goodbye Sirius 11 Nov 2007 7:06 pm
Reviewer: ddamato (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the scene with Sirius -- great chapter!! *big grin*
Title: Goodbye Sirius 17 Feb 2007 7:17 am
Reviewer: Kirinin (Signed) [Report This]
    The little girl does a quick dye-job from "fair" hair to "black ringlets". She's a witch all right...

    ;)

    -K
Title: Goodbye Sirius 26 Mar 2006 9:00 pm
Reviewer: Lauren (Anonymous) [Report This]

    I must apologize. When I began reading this story, I thought...oh someone's just copying off of another book, but this story is so creative and intelligent, so imaginative. I absolutely love it! I can't wait for the next chapters. You are doing an amazing job portraying Harry. Your descriptions in the dreams are amazing. I love it! Please, please update soon, so we can read more of your wonderful work!

    Author's Response: Apology accepted, I see where you would thinki that. While I am borrowing several ideas from her book and some of the plot points are based on her book, I've tried really hard to make it an original story. I'm so glad you like it, I hope the future chapters live up to your expectations.

Title: Goodbye Sirius 25 Mar 2006 5:06 am
Reviewer: Hey_Zelra (Signed) [Report This]
    Good story. Realistic.
Title: Goodbye Sirius 23 Mar 2006 11:17 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter, I like this setting. The dreams/visions are very interesting, nice visuals. I was shocked to see that Elvira was Snape's wife and that he had a child- nice job shocking us along with Harry. :) I really like Draco's struggles, and the conversations are done quite nicely. The way Harry pushed Draco into the lake was great. Whatever happened to the diary? I'll send you a list of typos to your e-mail instead of posting them here.
Title: Goodbye Sirius 23 Mar 2006 8:27 am
Reviewer: Lauren (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi...just out of curiousity...are you basing your story around The Great and Terrible Beauty by Libba Bray? Just wondering. But I have to say the story is pretty good so far.

    Author's Response: Yes, I am. When I read the book (which is one of my all time favorites) I thought that it would work really well with the Harry Potter universe. However, the ending will be rather different as well as the parts involving Voldemort.

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