I came across hour story and it is hard to put down. Great concept of duty and honor. Snaps ss a character really was not explored well in the books and thankfully a great actor portrayed him.
You did an excellent job showing an abused child. Abusers know how to manipulate just about everyone. I also liked Snape having a wife and child. A friend stays forever but sometimes with lover's one remembers only the ending.
Awesome story, any plans to finish it?
Well...you have me totally hooked on your wonderful story. I really hope you continue it soon.
Hey,
I enjoyed this story a lot and hope that you didn't give up on it completely since, as far as I know, it's been years since this has been updated. I like the way Harry behaves, that you made him very shy and obedient. It seems very logical. And Snape... I have to admit that I kind of want to slap him so he finally really wakes up and decides to care about Harry instead of just taking care of him. You could already see it starting to happen...
So, thanks for writing this and I hope that you didn't give up on it completely.
ai
Title: Consistere
| 28 Jul 2011 3:53 am
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Reviewer: Alex (Anonymous)
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I hope you write more of this story in the future, I want to know if Harry is able to trust adults and if is able to perform to his potential.
this is fantastic! i can't w8 until u update im really looking 4ward to reading wat happens nxt hopefully we'll hv more Harry/Sev bonding keep up the brilliant wrk!!
Title: Consistere
| 02 Apr 2011 4:17 am
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Reviewer: Shh (Anonymous)
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Great story - wonderfully written. I love Miss Sarah Sue Rae - I want to see more of this story - so I hope it continues!!
I love this story. I hope you update soon.
Title: Consistere
| 10 Jan 2011 1:34 pm
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Reviewer: leanne (Anonymous)
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I like it very much. Please continue to write.
Title: Consistere
| 03 Jan 2011 4:34 am
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Reviewer: Celes (Anonymous)
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Damn, it has to end there .... for now.
Thanks for the story so far! Eagerly awaiting the rest
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