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Title: Dicta quod Culpo 10 Nov 2007 12:32 am
Reviewer: ddamato (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chap!
Title: Dicta quod Culpo 13 Mar 2007 8:53 pm
Reviewer: Athena_Rhea (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Just one comment, volatile means something has a low boiling point, not that it's particularly flammable. So, technically, the only thing that would happen would be something boiling over if a student was inattentive.

    Other then that, I haven't found any problems so far - the characters are mostly who they should be.

    Author's Response: Depends on the definition you're using, hon. There are eight different definitions for the word, "volatile" in the dictionary, and only one is low boiling point. Volatile also means explosive, changeable, mercurial... As a noun (which I believe is how I used it) it can mean a gas or solvent that is explosive.

    Admin Edit: volatile - tending or threatening to break out into open violence; explosive: www.dictionary.com

Title: Dicta quod Culpo 01 Jun 2006 8:29 pm
Reviewer: Romulus (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry, he does seem to have a tendency to get into trouble!:)

    Author's Response: Unfortunately, true.
Title: Dicta quod Culpo 18 Apr 2006 7:00 pm
Reviewer: thee_unknown_factor (Anonymous) [Report This]
    the first quote you used, do you know who he is? Monson?

    anywas, I like the story, the sentence structure isn't british but then again, it doesn't really matter that much, does it.


    good job, update often!

    Author's Response: Yes, I do.  :)  And no, it wouldn't be so much.  I've tried, but well, I hail from the deep south, USA.  My beta readers are Brits, but I'm sure not.
Title: Dicta quod Culpo 16 Apr 2006 11:39 pm
Reviewer: sweets2 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please continue.  For once it's a story where on character is OOC really.  Update again soon.  WONDERFUL start

    Author's Response: Hrm?  Thank you.  And will do.
Title: Dicta quod Culpo 15 Apr 2006 9:28 pm
Reviewer: Hey_Zelra (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Please update soon.

    Author's Response: Your wish is my command...
Title: Dicta quod Culpo 13 Apr 2006 7:06 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I sense a hint of foreboding about the minister and trying to get Harry committed. Poor Harry, if that's in his future then he'll have a rougher path for sure on his already rocky one. Nice chaper. :) I liked how Snape decided and agreed that Harry should know what's going on. I wonder if that's what would have happened if he had been told in canon.

    Author's Response:

    *plays spooky music* There are several not-nice options awaiting Harry.  Dumbledore ruled out a wizarding orphanage, then there's the committed by Fudge route.  There's also going into care, and technically, the Malfoys could probably petition for custody.  Sirius's claim was never revoked because he was never actually convicted, and aside from the Lestranges, who are currently fugitives, Narcissa is Sirius's closest blood realitive. 

    Also, in my version of reality, the Dursleys don't actually have guardianship of Harry.  They have physical custody, but they never bothered to file the paperwork. It was never contested because of a derth of blood relations on both sides of his family.

    Snape told Harry about the prophecy in an effort to protect him yet again.  If Harry dies and he could have done something, then he dies as well.  Completely Slytherin motivations here... 

Title: Dicta quod Culpo 13 Apr 2006 5:02 am
Reviewer: Achilles (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Unkoh Sebus. lol. Cute. UPDATE SOON!!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks.  :) And stay tuned next week for chapter four... Same bat time, same bat channel.
Title: Dicta quod Culpo 12 Apr 2006 11:40 pm
Reviewer: greeneyes (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Wonderful as always!  I liked how Severus is shifting slowly but surely towards thinking of Harry as more than just James' son, and remembering that he's Lily's as well.  And it looks like you're not going to kill Sirius off--please?  I look forward to seeing what happens with Umbridge, and the Ministry.



    Author's Response: It will take a while longer but the goal is to have him willing to take Harry in by the end of the year.  And as for killing Sirius, well, you'll have to wait and see.

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