Amazing - I love the revenge Snape takes against Umbridge, especially the collaboration with the Weasley twins. You do a really good job of showing how protective he can be of his students. I also like the way you avoided Harry looking in his Penseive!
Author's Response: Thanks! Our favorite Slytherin is simply getting even.
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| 26 Apr 2006 1:37 am
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| Reviewer: Achilles (Anonymous)
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If Snape sent Harry to McGonagall, then that means he didn't get a chance to look in the pensieve. And that's a good thing. Also, one little nitpicky thing. Umbridge made him write "I must not tell lies" not "I will not tell lies". At least, that's what happened in the American edition. I don't know if it would be different in other editions. I like this Snape better. UPDATE SOON!!!
Author's Response: *smacks head* oops! We missed that. Fixing it... I've never read the British version. :) And that was part of why I did it like that; I'm fixing some of the stuff that I didn't like in the book. I'm not saying that Harry won't find out, but it didn't really seem very Snapeish to leave someone unattended in his office... I'd think he was too paranoid for that. Thank you for reading!
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