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Reviews For For Duty and Honor
Author's Response: Thank you! Though this won't be just for the summer... then again, that would be telling...
UPDATE!!! Such a great story.... I can't wait to read more!!!! Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you! Snape would know. ;) Lemming bits are components of several suicide potions....
oh gods oh gods oh gods....is Sirius dead??? but awwww, Snape/Harry bonding going on here! yay-ness! Author's Response: He's really most sincerely dead! I decided that if Sirius was to die, it was going to be a definite death, unlike canon.
this is a wonderful chapter! I love this story! I also like that you update often! Hope to see another update soon! I can't wait for when Snape goes to the Dursley's. I have heard that writers like to hear helpful criticism... but I don't know what would make this story any better. I like Snape's character even if it is Ooc a bit. I hope to see them working together better in the future and not just Snape wonderng why he cares... but this early in the story it's good you are working up to it! Update soon! From your ensnared reader! Snape126 Author's Response: I admit, that he is a little OOC, because I've had him evolve. In the books, Snape is more of a 2D character, because everything is from Harry's POV, and how well does one know one's least favorite teachers at his age? After all, don't teachers sleep under their desks? ;)
Author's Response: He could have, I suppose. But Sirius, unless he's in deep hiding, becomes a liability in a story like this. I hated it when JKR killed him, partially because she killed off Harry's only real support, and because of the method. I mean, really, throwing him through the veil of death? How ambiguous can you get?
Author's Response: You'll find out, I promise. Let's just say that he's grieving, which doesn't help matters any. |
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