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Title: Memento Mori 21 Sep 2017 10:50 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, Harry really is a prat when it comes to relationships, isn't he? Ha, very Ha, that funny feeling and the line Ginny said was just as well she might have said, "I have a crush on you!" But then, Harry had once thought that girls were born with such intelligence, so I guess boys really are clueless.
Title: Memento Mori 11 Nov 2007 6:15 am
Reviewer: ddamato (Signed) [Report This]
    *laughs* You gotta love Ginny. *grin*
Title: Memento Mori 23 Aug 2006 2:52 am
Reviewer: Anaknisatanas (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I love this.  Harry is so real and you've done a good job of showing how abused he was without getting really dark about it.  Snape is still his snarky self but he has actually gotten to know Harry a little bit and I really like that about your story.  I want to see what happens to the Dursley's and Umbridge.  The Heads of House have to have something to do about her since they were aware of what happened.  When Sirius died I felt so sad and poor Harry!  Still, a really great story.  I hope you update soon.


    Author's Response:

    Thanks!  I've seen lots of abused Harry stories.  Thing is, most authors tend to go overboard to make his case like the ones they see on the news that end up with the death of the victim.  Most simply aren't like that.  I'm not saying it's right, and I'm not saying that it's not a bad situation, because both of those would be lying.  I am, however, saying that probably at least half of physical abuse cases involve bruises, cuts, and a few broken bones.  Grabbing too hard, throwing the child against the wall, shaking the kid... those are all 'normal' in abuse cases.  (Probably Harry's had at least one spiral fracture, which is an absolute tell-tale sign of abuse.)

     Thank you!  I've done my best to keep as closely as I can to the canon representations of the characters.  Snape isn't suddenly going to turn nice and gushy--it's just not him without sarcasm and snarkiness.

    You will, I promise.  IIRC, right now the aurors have Umbridge, though.  And with her casting an Unforgiviable on Harry, she's automatically going to Azkaban for life.

    In a way, I was sorry to kill Sirius.  I was in shock when JRK did it!  But his existence was a bit superfluous with my plot, so I decided to follow canon in that he died.    I think, however, that I gave him a better death than he had before.

    Anyway, I'm glad you're enjoying this, and I hope to be updating soon.   

Title: Memento Mori 31 Jul 2006 2:29 am
Reviewer: lesyeuxverts (Signed) [Report This]
    Please say that you will update soon? Please? I feel like I've been waiting ages for the next chapter!


    Author's Response: I'm working on it, I promise.  I've had lots of technical difficulties, including my hard drive dying.  After I got a new one installed, it still took three days to recover the file.  Hopefully, I'll be posting chapter thirteen, Opera Optima, fairly soon. 
Title: Memento Mori 29 Jul 2006 8:41 pm
Reviewer: Luna Moonlight Fawn (Anonymous) [Report This]

    A great story I really like it:)Is this the end or will there be more? I hope there'll be more. Also at least two of the chapters were cut short for some reason:) Keep up the great work and update as soon as you possibly can:) May you be blessed with inspiration and have fun writing:)

    Have a nice summer and bye for now:) 



    Author's Response: Yes, there will be more.  For Duty and Honor will go through the summer at the very least.  I'm considering doing a sixth year sequel after this one is done.
Title: Memento Mori 17 Jul 2006 10:10 pm
Reviewer: alexdcl (Anonymous) [Report This]
    please, not Harry/Ginny

    Author's Response: Sorry.  It is the canon ship, so I had to have at least a little nod.  I'm not planning on Harry getting into a relationship; he has too much else to deal with ad adjust to.
Title: Memento Mori 14 Jul 2006 9:21 pm
Reviewer: catti666 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    : ) what a nice chappy. Harry and Ginny, yeah. I admit I'm still trying get familiar with the idea of them together though I've read last book three times already.  Two times in english and one time in Finnish. (proud to say more times in english) However, I*m certain that Harry will survive the new guardianship, hehe. I*m still looking forward to new chappies(ahh, I created plural to my new slang word, chappy, lol). Please update soon!
          Poison by relative1983
    That was prilliant relative! You always come up with some great story idea and result. I'm looking forward to see anything you will write next!

    Author's Response: I could see it coming since the second book.  JKR set Ginny up as one of the few people who could have any hope of understanding some of the hell that Moldyfarts puts Harry though....  Glad you like it.  :)
Title: Memento Mori 12 Jul 2006 1:07 am
Reviewer: violet_star77@hotmail.com (Anonymous) [Report This]
    So i just read all twelve chapters of this story. I really like how you are combining your own orignal story with the events of OotP. I was sad that Sirius died anyway but glad that harry got to talk to him a bit more in your story than in the book. I hope snape is good for/to him. I really like how this is going, though poor harry he has been so unloved, its sad.  keep up the great work. ~violet


    Author's Response: Thank you.  :)
Title: Memento Mori 08 Jul 2006 10:14 pm
Reviewer: Brittany (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yes. We are weird.. :) Hmm.. I like the idea about Myrtle spying. Well, I woulda thought ron would be mad at Dumbledore for allowing Snape to take Harry in.. And I like Neville.. I really like the chapter in general.. It was really good.. :)

    Author's Response: It hasn't penetrated Ron's head that much yet.
Title: Memento Mori 08 Jul 2006 8:55 pm
Reviewer: Ellie (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. I'm so glad that Snape is already Harry's guardian! And I hope they become fond of each other :)  On the other hand I really think so. They both have a lot in common and are main heroes of the story. You write about them and their feelings. And also about their friendship developning :) I can hardly wait for the next chapter so please... hurry up!

    Author's Response: Thank you.  The rest will come eventually--they just have to spend time together.  There's a stage new parents do go through in which they fall in love (get minds out of gutter) with their child.  ;) Nature's way of getting us to keep the rugrats.  Snape will most likely go through this as well, until he realizes that he doesn't want to go back to the way things were before and that he loves the kid.  It'll most likely take quite some time, too.  ;) Luckily, they have two whole months to spend time together...

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