Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

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Title: Pacta Sunt Servanda 18 Mar 2007 6:38 pm
Reviewer: Monica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved this, please continue?

    Author's Response: I will, I promise.  Not right away, but I didn't mean to take a hiatus...
Title: Pacta Sunt Servanda 18 Mar 2007 4:16 pm
Reviewer: Lou (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like the story so far (read your email at the AYLNO email list. Snape's denial of his caring and Harry's confusion were very realistic, and I admire your work on the scenes meant to match those in OotP, especially the scene in Dumbledore's office where Harry breaks the equipment.
    My only quibble is that I think Snape would speak more formally in places, such as at the Dursley's when he is speaking to Petunia. In here he says "me and your sister" where as I think he would use proper English and say "your sister and I".

    Author's Response: Thank you!  :) I love AYLNO, but my main complaint is that it seems a bit incomplete and the transition a bit forced without Severus's POV.  It's why I chose to use both Harry's and Severus's viewpoints when this particular plot jumped out and bit me in the butt.  Your words are something for me to consider. :) Thanks for the constructive criticism.
Title: Pacta Sunt Servanda 25 Feb 2007 6:17 am
Reviewer: Rocky (Signed) [Report This]
    I hate you!!!!! How can you just end it there?! I WANT MORE!!!!! You are a fantastic writer and I was crying. If only JK. followed your plot as well!!!!! Keep up the great work but could you just make sure you post faster and faster and faster?! Sorry. I just love your story.

    Author's Response: LOL!  My beta reader took chapters with her this weekend, so hopefully I should be able to update soon.  I'm very glad you're enjoying it!
Title: Pacta Sunt Servanda 27 Jan 2007 7:35 am
Reviewer: enigmaticpoet (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really enjoying the story, just read it today. Looking forward to when the new chapter comes out!

    And I just have to say, you've got the characterisation down great (and it took some effort there to not write "right shiny". dang habits!), which is something I've always had such trouble with when it comes to HP fic...

    Keep up the good work!
    ---Spike

    Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Title: Pacta Sunt Servanda 19 Jan 2007 9:16 pm
Reviewer: amy johnson (Anonymous) [Report This]
    When will yourr next chapter be out..

    Author's Response: I'm waiting to get it back from my beta reader.
Title: Pacta Sunt Servanda 14 Jan 2007 6:22 am
Reviewer: Solitare (Signed) [Report This]

    Awsome I can not wait for you to update again. You have a great writing style and the entire story just plain rocks!!! Thanks for writing!!

    Skittles to you! 



    Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you like my story, Solitare!  :)
Title: Pacta Sunt Servanda 12 Jan 2007 12:45 am
Reviewer: amy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    when will your next chapter be out..

    Author's Response: My beta reader has it.  She's had it for a few weeks.  *shrug*
Title: Pacta Sunt Servanda 11 Jan 2007 9:40 pm
Reviewer: miracle (Anonymous) [Report This]

    HI there

    great storry, cant wait til you update.

    But i have a question did you learn latin! ( because of the headline)

    shouldn't it be packta sevanda sunt,

    i mean i do NOT want to critisice you but i'm just interested, because i had to learn it for 7 years and now im just worriing, that i did not understand anything, so it is probably yours that is correct ,but could you explain it to me?

    Just so all the latin was not in vain

    and please dont be angry i mean listen to my english and you can see that i'm not one to mock someone becaus of language and such

    So fantastic story , keep it up

    miracle 



    Author's Response: Actually, I have a retired Latin teacher doing my translations, so I can assure you that they are correct.
Title: Pacta Sunt Servanda 01 Jan 2007 6:33 am
Reviewer: Amy Johnson (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love your story.I was wondering first if I can be on your mailing list so when a new chapter comes out I will know.Second when will the next chapter be out...

    Author's Response: I don't have one, actually.  Your best bet is to get an account here or at fanfiction.net and add me to favorites here or story alerts there.  :) I'm glad you like my story.
Title: Pacta Sunt Servanda 27 Dec 2006 5:21 am
Reviewer: violet_star77@hotmail.com (Anonymous) [Report This]

    ooh, this is lovely! Snape's change of character is very slow and natural. you are doing a great job with the progression. i am very curious about the visit to st. mungo's. keep up the great work, i can't wait to read more!

    ~violet



    Author's Response: Thank you!  In my opinion, most stories force the change a bit too much, so I tried not to.  I'm waiting on my beta reader before I can update again.

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