Potions and Snitches
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Title: Volare Percipio 30 Aug 2007 8:17 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I really, really liked the hospital scene. :) Also, the clothes buying trip, and Harry's introspection. Good job!

    The snake... I probably wouldn't have made her from the South, ending up in England. :P Silly Snake. I like her color and that she's going to bite anyone who harms Harry. Cute. She seems to be stealing the spotlight for awhile.

    Author's Response:

    Unfortunately, that's where coral snakes are from. It only works because she was bought in a pet store, not found somewhere. And being a magical version of the coral snake, it was logical that she'd be in the Magical Menagerie. As Sev pointed out, her venom is a useful potions ingrediant... There are only two native snakes in Britain, and it's illegal to make pets of them. IIRC, they're also non-venomous. I wanted to give Harry a snake that was 1) pretty 2) could grow to be pretty big and 3) was poisonous. Miss Sarah Sue Rae is really there to serve as Harry's confidante--he doesn't trust grown-ups, and she's a very non-threatening person for him to talk to. It's going to take along time to break through Harry's walls. Severus is trying, and it's starting to sink in that Harry is his complete responsibility. He figures that he's already up on the Dursleys by providing Harry with medical care and adequate clothing.

Title: Volare Percipio 30 Aug 2007 6:31 am
Reviewer: LindseySnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my goodness thanks so much for the update. I really liked this chapter, Severus seems to be quite as ease with Harry. I just hope that Harry will learn to be at ease as well and will see in time that Severus is nothing like the Dursleys, and that he deserves all the simple things in life that he's been denied. I love his new familiars sense of humor, very funny. Keep up the great work, and please update again soon. LES

    Author's Response: Severus is a verrry good actor.  Because this was from Harry's point of view, we didn't see just how ill-at-ease Severus really was.  He's doing this out of love for his best friend and a vow he made to her fourteen years ago.  Eventually, Severus will learn to care for Harry as just Harry, but it will take time, just as it will take time for Harry to learn to trust Severus.

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